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Guided by Faith

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Can faith guide our path?

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Barbara, is it bad that I want Seth and Emma kiss already? LoL

They are such a cute couple. I wish I had someone like Seth. He is so protective and caring.

Another lovely chapter. I love it.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
    I can promise a kiss, but it won't come for a while, when it does, it may be a surprise. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BermyBye50
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Barbara,

Another magnificent chapter in the book Guided by Faith. This is guaranteed to be listed as the number one book on a future New York Times best seller list. I for one will one who will purchase a copy.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
    Thank you for your encouragement.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Sometimes, the silliest things cause people to have second thoughts or make the wrong decisions, then other times, there very well might be a legitimate reason for them to back up. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
    Thank you for understanding.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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A very good chapter involving a number of characters as they work on Emma's house. Mixed in with that is Emma's concerns about what people are saying, and how it is upsetting her. It was a good idea for the pastor to convince her to talk to Seth.

The doggy door, the work being done, the dogs, and ordering pizza create a lighter mood, and Emma is more willing to open up to Seth. It is always good to talk things out, and I think you did that well. Emma seemed more confident at the end of it, although this stalker is still a big worry.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
    Thank you for the encouragement.
reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Aug-2023
    You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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They have sorted out some of there problems with each other, but I'm sure there are many more to talk through before they can move on to the next stage of their relationship. Peggy and that man in the car are still a problem, and I can't wait to see how both are resolved. Lots happened, and lots more to come! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sankey
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So sorry I am a bit slow getting to this. Things have got in the way a bit. Another good read and hoping the romance is on its way as long as the stalker gets sorted.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sanku
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This is a very touching chapter. I liked the way Emma took the initiative and they had a proper talk .The man who grabbed her has a lot to answer for Hope Seth will soon find him..

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Excellent chapter in your book Guided by Faith! The storyline held my attention throughout the entire piece and I love that the characters interacted perfectly throughout the story as well.

Thanks for sharing and may God bless you and your family!

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 01-Aug-2023
    ;-)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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I enjoyed reading this. You have a gift for natural-sounding dialogue.
Here is a part that made me want to read another selection to see how it went:
And one thing led to another." Emma nodded, and Seth continued, "Remember the night Fur Ball got away, and I removed the glass sliver from your foot?" After she indicated she did, he said, "You sat in a chair, and I covered your lap with a blanket because your plain blue nightshirt was incredibly alluring. I didn't want those thoughts or feelings about you. Nightshirts on the right person can be seductive."

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a solid chapter overall, with good tension being provided by the creepy man considered throughout in the background. Especially your description was good. kay

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.