Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

You can feel the pain and heartbreak of the lover. I have seen the pain of not wanting to live when your partner dies. You captured the emotion perfectly.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy--very dramitic and sad.
Personally, I'd be too chicken shit to folow, but I'd say "I'll miss you, have a nice trip--write me when you get there!"

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023

Thank you very much, Mike. I appreciate your kind review and positive feedback. Have a great day.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was a very dramatic poem. Reminiscent of Romeo and Juliet. The picture added to the passionate aspect of it. Only one word bothered me. Grim. Not sure why but it did. Gretchen

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen. I appreciate your kind review and positive feedback. I'm a big horror fan and I love the Grim Riper, not what he represents but the way he looks but I realize not everyone is a fan. I will take a look and see what I can do. Have a great day. :)

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this emotional poem with us. I do understand not wanting to live when your partner dies. It's very traumatic. You did a wonderful job describing this emotion.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara. Your opinion, especially with romance poetry, means a lot to me since you are an expert in the field. I appreciate your kind review and positive feedback. Have a great day.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

well, you got the dramatic (excellent) imagery down LOL
the second pic is way cool!

a great gogyohka! thank you for sharing

shelley :)

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

I'm very dramatic lol

Thank you, Shelley. :)

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

There are so many who can't see how to live when their loved one dies. It was that way for my husband's uncle. They were so intertwined in life. It was so sad for him but he's dying now and hope both will be united in heaven.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Oh, that's sad now but he can look forward eternity with his dear wife.

Big hugs, love you, big sister. 💓

Marival ❤️

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A true love poem! These two souls will not be parted in death. Any sadness is overtaken by these simple and beautiful sentiments, conveyed in stunning presentation. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you very much, Debbie, I appreciate the kind words and excellent five stars review.

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

Quite a decision to make, whatever the time frame we are given, it seems to me s that it's not easy to let go of your soulmate, it seems to be two close people will desire to be together in death as well as life, beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

It's very dramatic, not true, of course. Spanish people are like that LoL I will add a note in my A.N.

Thank you very much, Roy, I appreciate the kind words and excellent five stars review.

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reply by royowen on 07-Jun-2023

Yep, that?s true