Honey Bee
A vital environmental friend33 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
It is a very beautiful haiku and congratulations on the well deserved win.
Your imagery, visuals and presentation are stunning.
Loved the B alliteration in "bountifully bestowing."
Thank you for your educational author notes.
A most enjoyable write
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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It is a very beautiful haiku and congratulations on the well deserved win.
Your imagery, visuals and presentation are stunning.
Loved the B alliteration in "bountifully bestowing."
Thank you for your educational author notes.
A most enjoyable write
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind rating and thoughtful comments! I'm delighted you enjoyed. Take care Debbie
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines flow and connect well! The last line says it all! Thank
you for the author's notes - I enjoyed the education! I liked the last line of this poem and how the author classified "her sweet golden gifts". The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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The first two lines flow and connect well! The last line says it all! Thank
you for the author's notes - I enjoyed the education! I liked the last line of this poem and how the author classified "her sweet golden gifts". The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you so much for this. Your rating and comments are greatly valued. Best wishes Debbie
Comment from Sally Law
Sorry to have missed this, Debbie. A beauty for the contest in 5-7-5 short verse poetry. Congratulations on your blue ribbon! Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Sorry to have missed this, Debbie. A beauty for the contest in 5-7-5 short verse poetry. Congratulations on your blue ribbon! Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much for this! Greatly valued. Debbie
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Debbie,
This is an imaginative description of a bee and two good metaphors in three lines. Wow, 5000 flowers in one day. Now a know why the say "busy as a bee".
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Hi Debbie,
This is an imaginative description of a bee and two good metaphors in three lines. Wow, 5000 flowers in one day. Now a know why the say "busy as a bee".
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Joan, for your kind rating and comments. All greatly valued. Take care Debbie
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Don't mention it. Debbie.
Joan
Comment from Mike Grimes
What a perfect haiku! Such an apt summation of nature's most recognizable pollinators. I enjoyed the author's notes just as much the haiku itself! You have done your research, and the haiku is lovely. Thank you for sharing :)
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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What a perfect haiku! Such an apt summation of nature's most recognizable pollinators. I enjoyed the author's notes just as much the haiku itself! You have done your research, and the haiku is lovely. Thank you for sharing :)
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Wow, thank you so much for such a generous and kind rating! I'm delighted you enjoyed and found it interesting. Thanks again, Debbie
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Congratulations to
Your contest winner.
I like the picture: simple and outstanding.
Thanks for sharing more details in your notes. Certainly I learn a lot from it.
Once again, I enjoy your writing.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Congratulations to
Your contest winner.
I like the picture: simple and outstanding.
Thanks for sharing more details in your notes. Certainly I learn a lot from it.
Once again, I enjoy your writing.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much for this! I'm delighted you enjoyed and found it informative. I'm very much in praise of our little buzzy friend! Take care Debbie
Comment from GWHARGIS
I loved your poem. I have been learning more about bees and their habitats and how they are such a huge component in our food cycle. Very well written. I also enjoyed the author notes. Well written and informative. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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I loved your poem. I have been learning more about bees and their habitats and how they are such a huge component in our food cycle. Very well written. I also enjoyed the author notes. Well written and informative. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much Gretchen for this! I'm delighted you enjoyed and found it informative. I'm very much in praise of our little buzzy friend! Take care Debbie
Comment from lancellot
Well, this is very good and very true. When I think about all the articles about bees becoming scarce and may one become extinct, I can't believe how much people have ruined nature. This deserves to be an All Time Best.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Well, this is very good and very true. When I think about all the articles about bees becoming scarce and may one become extinct, I can't believe how much people have ruined nature. This deserves to be an All Time Best.
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much for this! I'm delighted you enjoyed and found it informative. I'm very much in praise of our little buzzy friend! Take care Debbie
Comment from jake cosmos aller
hmm this could be both a 5-7-5 poem or a conventional haiku works both ways. I like the image and the description of bees doing their thing and making delicious honey in the process
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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hmm this could be both a 5-7-5 poem or a conventional haiku works both ways. I like the image and the description of bees doing their thing and making delicious honey in the process
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind rating and comments. All greatly valued. Take care Debbie
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. It has a very nice overall presentation . great photo to compliment
your words as well very colourful and vibrant photo. Congrats on the win.
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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This is a beautifully written poem. It has a very nice overall presentation . great photo to compliment
your words as well very colourful and vibrant photo. Congrats on the win.
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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You are so kind, Joanne! Thank you and I'm so pleased you enjoyed this verse about our little buzzy friend. Take care Debbie
