One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
A child is terrified when suddenly is lost without mom's hand. She was your angel to give you comfort and take you home.
Well done in both word in presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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A child is terrified when suddenly is lost without mom's hand. She was your angel to give you comfort and take you home.
Well done in both word in presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so glad that a kindly lady guided you home and even knew where you lived! It's a terrifying thing to feel lost and separated from mom as a little child! Well described. But without your notes, it could have been a much more devastating separation and "home" could be heaven.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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I'm so glad that a kindly lady guided you home and even knew where you lived! It's a terrifying thing to feel lost and separated from mom as a little child! Well described. But without your notes, it could have been a much more devastating separation and "home" could be heaven.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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I was very attached to my parents, I couldn't even spend a night at my friends house, but I was little. I was traumatized enough that after all this time I still remember. There were so many people!
Thank you very much, big sister. You always get my poems.
Love,
MariVal
Comment from w.j.debi
You were lucky that a nice lady found you and took you home. So many stories like this end up in tragedy nowadays. I am glad yours had a happy ending.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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You were lucky that a nice lady found you and took you home. So many stories like this end up in tragedy nowadays. I am glad yours had a happy ending.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Yes, I was lucky.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, I think most mothers could share a story of a misplaced child. It can be really scary. Thank you for sharing this complete package with us. The expression on this child's face is priceless.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Yes, I think most mothers could share a story of a misplaced child. It can be really scary. Thank you for sharing this complete package with us. The expression on this child's face is priceless.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aww this was sweet yet sad... great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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aww this was sweet yet sad... great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
The dual pictures were astonishing, Gypsy. They showed the lost young girl who was rescued by the ladies of the church. Your words showed the dismay of the young girl. The angel watched over her. Very well done and greatly but sadly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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The dual pictures were astonishing, Gypsy. They showed the lost young girl who was rescued by the ladies of the church. Your words showed the dismay of the young girl. The angel watched over her. Very well done and greatly but sadly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Aryr. It's so good to hear from you. Have a wonderful night. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from royowen
Yes, we lost both our girls at different stages at the large local shopping centre, when they were young, but we'd given them strict instructions of what to do if they were lost, and they obeyed that, and kindly people gathered around them. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Yes, we lost both our girls at different stages at the large local shopping centre, when they were young, but we'd given them strict instructions of what to do if they were lost, and they obeyed that, and kindly people gathered around them. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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My oldest daughter liked to hide in the clothing store clothes rack... in the middle. She really scared me. I was only 17 years old, I didn't think about having a plan. It's a very good idea. We my grandson we do have several plans. Thank you, Roy. It's so good to hear from you. Have a wonderful night.
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Such a relief to find them again,
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is an interesting form I had not heard of before. Or at least not recently. It sounds as if this is part of a lecture given to a child after a past tense experience. Interesting post.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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This is an interesting form I had not heard of before. Or at least not recently. It sounds as if this is part of a lecture given to a child after a past tense experience. Interesting post.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Crystie. It's so good to get a review from you. Have a wonderful night. This actually happened to me when I was very little. I didn't know my complete address but I knew enough to guide her home.
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