Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was indeed a great haibun, Gypsy. The dual pictures were great, the picture was fantastic, as they describe the situation outside the window. Your words were delightful because of your laughter and love. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you very much for your time and kind review. I appreciate you.

Gypsy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am pretty sure you hit every sense with this poem, maybe not taste, but I'm pretty sure the ice cream truck might contain taste. LOL I enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you, Barbara. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Exceptional

Lavender is one of my favourite scents so you hooked me easily with both topic choice and bloom.
Whilst the display is eye-catching the clever prose and 5-7-5choice sealed the deal.
I admire your talent.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you, Shirley. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm sure the formatting looks better on the PC than on the phone. Lovely haibun that captures a sweet intimate moment and ends with a haiku that celebrates spring and the love fever it inspires.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Yes, it looks better in the computer or laptop.

Thank you, big sister. Have a wonderful day.

Love,

Marival ❤️

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Haibun poem- good picture presentation- interesting story exploring many different visuals and feeling mixed together searching for a conclusion- not sure about 'Amber musk' the smell? and 'wave flirty' suggest a pause between- or "furtively "
Good job AP

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Hello, AP, I appreciate your help with grammar. I corrected the problem.

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from BeyondtheShadows

Excellent

Beautiful poem, I love the imagery you created. I can almost smell the scents of amber and lavender. Plus bonus points for adding ice cream trucks in the mix!! Love me some ice cream!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs