Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice and well written Loop poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery that goes well with your words. I know about being anxiety. It kind of goes with the MS I have. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023

Thanks for the positive review!

Comment from BeyondtheShadows

Good

Awesome poem. I took understand the woes of anxiety and depression and how it has that ability to grip. We must to remember the affirmations you wrote about, to begin to trust the world a bit more, be positive, carefree and calm.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine loop and I can identify with your sentiments as I have suffered with anxiety when there is something I have to deal with on my own. I have lost sleep over some things until they are overcome. Health issues and dealing with authorities, documents etc I find hard to deal with at times, I must be getting old! A fine write, love the rhymes and loops aren't easy to write, you did a great job here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thanks for your review, and for sharing your thoughts!

Comment from Ricky1024

Exceptional

I will occasionally blend the loop style into my writings but I've never entered a contest dealing with that subject.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry and have a Blessed day!
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thanks so much for your review, and for so many stars!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is clever and difficult to achieve as a loop poem (have tried it myself) but you have definitely nailed it and I love the message which I can relate to so well, the need to calm oneself and slow down all the negative chatter in one's head. Thanks for sharing and good luck, Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thank you for your kind review! I'm glad you found it relatable.

Comment from Julie Lau

Excellent

Hi, Mintybee. Well done with this loop poem, a form I haven't had a go at yet, but must sometime. (I don't think it will be easy, so I'm procrastinating.) Well done too for the positive message, that negative thoughts and feelings can be overcome. Julie L

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thanks for your positive review! This is my first attempt at a loop poem. It took some work!