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Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, it's always a pleasure to read everything you post and I've certainly learned plenty from our years of reading and reviewing each other's work. But most of all, you're a fine person I've certainly enjoyed rubbing elbow with and would hate to see you go. Wishing you the best in whatever you decide! Ric

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Will tell you this, you are one of the two biggest reasons I would stay. Would certainly miss, not only my best reviewer who's reviews I put more stock in than anyone else's, but a compadre too.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Well, he got what he deserved. And hopefully more when he is inside prison. Some people seem to be evil from birth, why one baby can turn out to be a saint and the next a murdering nasty killer. We can only hope he never gets released.
I'm sorry you are thinking of leaving, but I do understand with the cost of living as high as it is. Some things have to be given up, and unfortunately this has to go for you. I wish you good luck in whatever way you choose to go. But, hope to see you sometime soon. :) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
    Undecided whether leaving or not. However, appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Oh my gosh. I do hope you will reconsider and re-up as they say in the army. I enjoy your writing and the way you look at the world. Guarded like the way I do. This is terrifying that a literal child did this crime. Even worse that it was perpetrated against another child. I vote you renew. You didn't ask ... but.
Gretchen

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
    Still considering what will do. Appreciate your comments and the review. Crimes like this makes one wonder what this world is coming to, doesn't it?
Comment from Wendy G
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I hope you don't leave before finishing "Unwanted Dog" , which is a very powerful story. Horrifying in parts and very hard to read, but compelling and engrossing. I hope you will publish it, and expose the wrings dine. Yet the decision must be yours. I know you have been disappointed in some ways by certain decisions. I too came close to leaving when my last renewal was due. I decided to wind back and choose to write less. Less pressure, and ignore ratings etc. I hope you make the right decision for you. But if you do go, you will be missed. Best wishes in either case. Wendy

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
    Not decided yet what will do. Still weighing options. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Brett,
I'm glad you let us know Fucci's outcome. It would appear that he is without remorse, so the best place is where he can't hurt anyone else. That being said, perhaps in time he'll have a change of heart. I can only hope so. Everyone has to do what they have to do as far as the subscription to FS goes. I guess for $99.00, I've gotten a lot of great material to read. Being on here and getting feedback on my work has been nice too. I may never write another book, but if I do, what I've learned here has certainly been beneficial to me. I hope that you decide to stick around, but if you don't, I understand. Good luck with whatever you decide.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
    Not sure which way I will go. Still considering what will do. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from royowen
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How anyone can possibly sink to the inhuman level is probably beyond most folk's ability to comprehend, certainly in my apprehension of the man's condition, something way beyond my understanding. This is a great post Brett, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
    Appreciate your comments and the review. Does make one wonder what this world is coming to, doesn't it?
reply by royowen on 28-Mar-2023
    Yep
Comment from Sankey
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Dear bro Brett. Thanks for continuing this story and I would ask if you pull the plug on this place....I am thinking of doing the same actually, please let me have the rest of the Unwanted Dog privately, thanks. God Bless. See you elsewhere if??

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
    Not sure what I will do. Would hate to lose all the writing I have posted on this site but feel that $99 is a steep fee to e. Hope all is well in your world.
reply by Sankey on 28-Mar-2023
    You should have your stuff saved elsewhere as well. That said I am way behind storing my stuff as well!!
Comment from country ranch writer
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If you leave I will be sad for we have been friends for long time. It will be sad to see you go my dear friend, I have enjoyed you stories. Yes they are getting out of control with their pricy pricing. Those of us little pays feel the crunch and we end up with so little in return. Money is scarce for those of us on a tight budget. I'd social security checks don't go far.people don't understand this fact.
What ever you decide is best for you my friend but I will miss you!If I don't see you here again I for one wish you safe travels in your journey of life. So many are leaving here it's sad.hugs.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
    Yes we have. Not sure which way I will go. Appreciate your comments and the review.
reply by country ranch writer on 28-Mar-2023
    Hugs
reply by country ranch writer on 28-Mar-2023
    Hugs
Comment from Ulla
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Brett, please don't leave. I would greatly miss your writing. I will admit a 99 $ sounds like a lot of money. But is it really: divide it by 360 and it's not that much is s it? I enjoy Fanstory. I really want to read the rest of Unwanted Dog' who is now a very wanted one.
Now, as to the present story. I think so many young people have lost their way, because there's no boundaries set for them. A great shame and a dangerous path. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
    Yes, $99 is a lot of money to join a writing site. Belonged to several over the years and can see $69 to $79 a year. On the other hand would hate to lose my posted writing on this site. Not sure what will do yet. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
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You asked why young people had lost all respect for life and living. I'll give you my opinion. I think it is because they have no boundaries anymore. Parents let most run wild and afraid of correcting them because of over played child abuse rules. It is a mess that everyone will continue to pay for. You did a great job. Have a blessed Sunday afternoon. Shirley

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
    Appreciate your comments and the review.