Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

You created a most visual poem. Your artwork just adds to its overall presentation.

Very descriptive: moon pours into river

Might you consider for your Haiku: pours a million night lights ...?

Mark

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thank you very much, Mark. It's always good to hear from you. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy, and a very cool picture----reminds me of some bizarre I thought I saw taking acid back in the day.

That's not true, the one and only time I took acid somebody though it would be fun to watch me freaking out. I thought I contracted a weird virus for weeks after that

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you very much for the exceptional review

Gypsy

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

A stunning picture of a liquid moon flowing into the river. You took this image and added your own stunning haiku.
Just beautifully written and presented.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I love the idea of the full moon pouring nights into the river. That's creative. The artwork you chose is absolutely perfect for this Haiku. Thank you for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

WOW, what an amazing picture of the moon becoming the water falls, Gypsy. Your words were perfect for the picture, they simply tied it all together. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

When we see an image of the sea and sky seemingly joined, we stare at them and ponder this mystery of light and water in constant motion, and constantly together.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your modern haiku poem- excellent picture presentation of the moon pouring it's light into, and becoming the river - nice - million nights- good job AP

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, very good. A poem of truth. Yes, the full moon does brighten the river as well as the night. Awesome photo choice. Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I guess the many currents of the river reflected the bright full moon into the dark river so it could seem like a "million nights" in the flowing river. Beautiful presentation!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful weekend.

Love,

Marival

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I like the personification in this poem and the alliteration is also used. The photo is amazing. I guess the photo gave you the idea for this poem.

Well done.

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023

Yes, ekphrastic poems are inspired by pictures or paintings.

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy