Comment from G0dd0ll

Good

Now I wanted to give you five because I so loved that phrase but it just seemed so undone! Take that piece & add a bit but mostly, put it to some music....Bravo

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023

Thanks for sharing zanya

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the one-line poem contest. The text is a great size. The message reads clearly like a succinct story. That part is well-done.
I am glad you used colored font and background. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023

Thanks for a great review for this little poem. zanya

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 22-Mar-2023

Wow! I have reviewed three in a row. It's my pleasure. You are welcome.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I admire your witty one-line poem. The picture of the blue piggy bank really brings it to life. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I think you should eliminate the first period maybe sun with a comma. You have two sentences because of the period. I don't want you disqualified because of it.

Nicely done.
John

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023

Thanks for reviewing and the SPAGS reminder. zanya