One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I like the beauty of this haiku in both words and picture, but even more the message that both show. In the storms of life, we're like the flower - bent, but not broken, but even if we break, God can restore us. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I like the beauty of this haiku in both words and picture, but even more the message that both show. In the storms of life, we're like the flower - bent, but not broken, but even if we break, God can restore us. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Hello, Verna,
thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day (or night).
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
Our lives are like the flower standing in the face of torrential rains. As we stand strong, we will again bloom and be a beauty to this world. I loved your haiku much, Patricia.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Our lives are like the flower standing in the face of torrential rains. As we stand strong, we will again bloom and be a beauty to this world. I loved your haiku much, Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Hello, Patricia,
thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day (or night).
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a clever Haiku about a flower in the rain. I like the alliteration and the gorgeous presentation. I like your color and the black background works great.
Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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What a clever Haiku about a flower in the rain. I like the alliteration and the gorgeous presentation. I like your color and the black background works great.
Well done.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery, and your message is clear. People, just like the flower, may become bent, but not broken. The resilience of Man. Well done. Beautiful presentation. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery, and your message is clear. People, just like the flower, may become bent, but not broken. The resilience of Man. Well done. Beautiful presentation. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your kind and insightful review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so glad you entered this haiku into the contest!! It reminds me of you - as you've been through some torrential storms in life that may have forced you to bend at times but you overcame and grew even stronger while sharing you fragrance to all around you! Hope this does well in the contest!
I wondered why you didn't use "but" in the last line - as I thought "bent but not broken" would work as well but I know you are sensitive to the sound of the words.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I'm so glad you entered this haiku into the contest!! It reminds me of you - as you've been through some torrential storms in life that may have forced you to bend at times but you overcame and grew even stronger while sharing you fragrance to all around you! Hope this does well in the contest!
I wondered why you didn't use "but" in the last line - as I thought "bent but not broken" would work as well but I know you are sensitive to the sound of the words.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the exceptional six stars review, big sister. I changed the last line, it sounds better. Love you.
Marival ❤️
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It was just a suggestion if you agreed. You're always welcome! Hugs!
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Yes, it's a good suggestion and I agree (*÷*)
Hugs
Comment from royowen
The same as a tree bent by the strong wind, it's under stress but not broken, a really wonderful metaphor that speaks of enduring under pressure, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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The same as a tree bent by the strong wind, it's under stress but not broken, a really wonderful metaphor that speaks of enduring under pressure, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your kind and insightful review.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Very powerful and short haiku about the resilience of flowers in nature and the lessons humans can draw from the resilience found in nature, we all need to be learn to be flexible and not rigid to survive what fate has in store for us.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Very powerful and short haiku about the resilience of flowers in nature and the lessons humans can draw from the resilience found in nature, we all need to be learn to be flexible and not rigid to survive what fate has in store for us.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your kind and insightful review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from JT traveller
Fantastic Haiku. I particularly enjoyed the circular nature of this one. Resilient to begin, bent not broken to end. Definitely one of your best. I love it. Jacqueline
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Fantastic Haiku. I particularly enjoyed the circular nature of this one. Resilient to begin, bent not broken to end. Definitely one of your best. I love it. Jacqueline
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your kind and insightful review.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I agree with you here that flowers are resilient and even the most delicate roses seem to survive a storm and still retain the will to blossom, a fine write, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I agree with you here that flowers are resilient and even the most delicate roses seem to survive a storm and still retain the will to blossom, a fine write, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your kind and insightful review.
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