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Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, well done; well said. All creatures great and small are guided by God's light, even if they resist. His light just draws us in. We can only fight it so long. Thought provoking. Great photo choice. Good 5-7-5 format. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
    Margaret,

    Thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Often with our lives we fly in darkness. Hopefully, we use God's guiding light to help us through this journey. I saw a metaphor with this poem. Once again, a beautiful package. Thank you.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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This was indeed a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. I loved your words because they did show that birds do fly at night. And fly they do, without fear. I loved the picture. Blessed be n hugs!!!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your Traditional haiku 5/7/5 very nice- at one with nature- good word count and connection between lines- nice picture presentation- Good Job-AP

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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I think that describes life in general. I don't know what is around the bend in life at any time so it's like flying in darkness. But God is our Light so we can trust Him as we keep flying.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
    Yes, that's what I was thinking, and in my darkest time He was there to guide me.

    Thank you for the review, big sister. Love you.

    Marival ❤️
Comment from Nicki Nance
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Just gorgeous - the art, the words, the sentiment. It would be grand if that depth of faith would make its way up the food chain. Thanks for the uplifting work.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
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Gypsy Rose, this is a wonderful how cool. It is well presented and the wording is absolutely perfect I enjoyed reading it very much as I always am when I read your work. Have a good evening and God bless. Patricia

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs