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Random Acts of Kindness

a random act of Kindness can change the world

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Comment from karenina
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I am a firm believer in this, Jake. I'm catching up on offering return reviews for those kind enough to review my last post...in doing so I scroll through each portfolio until I find a post that needs one more review to "boost" it to recognized or "ATB"--OR until I find a title that screams "Stop! Read ME!"

This was the latter. In a world torn into little pieces of political division and bias it's just so easy to oh, pay for the car behind you when you get a coffee at Dunkin's... Or help that woman put her groceries in her car on a hot 95 degree day (like today!)

Every pebble of kindness thrown into life's pond expands outward...touching every shore.

I wish everyone would get on board with this one!

Karenina




 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
    thanks I try to do this every day
reply by karenina on 08-Sep-2023
    In this way, I believe there is hope!
Comment from eliz100
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Congratulations on your 1,000 post. That is a lot of writing. I have been reading your work for a while. To me, it looks like a poem and often reads like a story. what is it? I especially enjoyed the message in this piece and I totally agree.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
    probably a prose poem of sorts
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Congratulations on reaching a milestone, It is quite an accomplishment.
How true, even the smallest gesture can make a person's day and they may even pass it on with their own act of kindness.
A very well-written and powerful message for a much-needed world where we often lack empathy and kindness.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
    thanks a lot. I did not even know I had reached that milestone.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
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I can just imagine how wonderful it would be if people would commit one random act of kindness. Pay it forward and the peace , even if only temporary would be a blessing. Maybe have a Random Act Of Kindness Day. We have our hope and faith that day will be coming. Thank you for sharing this great well written poem. Congratulations on your milestone!

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
    Thanks a lot
Comment from Cass Carlton
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How true. I was in Kmart one busy
morning when a little girl became very upset over a pair of slippers (her size) and I found her and dried her tears and we were chatting quite calmly when her mother came upon us in the next aisle, She just looked at me and said, "How much do you charge per hour?" The little girl was known to ''wind herself up"
and create mayhem for hours on end, Somehow this time she was short circuited and the storm passed.Later at the checkout she bestowed a shy kiss and said "Thank you"
Her mother had a very pleasant day instead of one coping with a tiresome child. I knew it was due to the fact that I had taken a moment to dry her tears,And I felt really good about it. cheers Cass,










 Comment Written 07-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    cool
Comment from jessizero
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Congratulations on your milestone post! This was a great post to celebrate that. I just have one note:
"Give someone a set on the train" might be a typo. "Give someone a seat on the train"?
Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    great and I will fix the typo
Comment from JT traveller
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Congratulations on your 1000th post! You must be a very busy man indeed.

Another great poem. Perfect meter and flow.

Just one small suggestion if I may,

"Give someone a set on the train..."

Seat?

Keep up the loving messages. The world is a better place for it.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    thanks and I will fix the typo
Comment from Mark Kuglin
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Great poem...It's succinct and has message everyone needs to hear and apply.

There are two issues though...

You have a typo

"give a set" should be seat

Your closing line starts with "would"
I'd switch it to wouldn't
Would isn't appropriate with the question mark.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    thanks I will the typos
reply by Mark Kuglin on 07-Feb-2023
    You're welcome