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Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, this poem is so beautifully penned and filled with great sensory appeal. Of special note:

mom's precious child
made of love and laughter

(This is so very true. Children are God's gifts and a blessing.)

Love the photo. This poem made me smile. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. Margaret


 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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When parents are full of love and laughter, so are the children. I loved this poem. Children are truly a gift from God. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your naani poem- cute picture presentation- excellent flow! - with a rhyming song / music quality - always a plus when permissible- sounds more like poetry to me- is easy to follow- good connection between lines- good job

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
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Cherubs (Angels very Young)
Are beautiful beings Created by Heavenly Father with All His Purity of Love.
The "Innocents"
Sometimes not exactly as you and me.
Smiles that never disappoint nor hate.
If only we could understand before it is too late?
Doctor Ricky 1025
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"


 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from l.raven
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Hi Gypsy, so good to see you my
sweet friend...

children are truly a gift from God...
and the apple of every mother's eye...
more precious than gold...

I love your poem sweet girl...and your
picture is precious...very nicely written...
love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much, my friend. It's good to hear from you. Have a wonderful weekend. Love you too.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by l.raven on 04-Feb-2023
    always so very welcome my sweet friend...
    and you have a lovely weekend as well...love you xxoo
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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This one I get completely. The picture is great, and the written words depict the image of this child and the words are clear. ...................................................................

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much,

    Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
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Gypsy, This is a very sweet and cute Naani poem you have penned about the sweet little cherub. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose! Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Your exceptional review means a lot coming from you. Thank you very much, Teri. Have a wonderful weekend!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Our children are full of our love and laughter and that is what makes them healthy children and adults. Enjoyed your well chosen pictures. Those rosy cheeks are springlike even in winter!

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Your exceptional review means a lot coming from you. Thank you very much, big sister. Have a wonderful weekend!

    Love,

    Marival ❤️
reply by lyenochka on 03-Feb-2023
    💞💖