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A unique friendship affects the course of 2 lives.

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Comment from jmdg1954
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That seems like a fantastic idea. Is there something on the market like this suit? An invention like this wouldn't necessarily be limited to golf.

Good chapter and with Dana now more prevalent, I'm curious to see her involvement.

Cheers. John

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
    Regarding the suit, not to my knowledge there isn't. I don't even know if it's theoretically possible, but it sounded like a neat invention. Maybe I should patent the idea.

    Abby becomes the richest woman in the world as she next invents a bowling suit, a tennis suit, a high-jumping suit...the possibilities are endless!
Comment from Jay Squires
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Now ... this is getting to some fascinating possibilities with a suit that would teach a person to golf. As the brains of this story, how did you come up with that? I remember a club that, if you didn't swing it right would do something uncharacteristic (though I don't remember what it did ... it seemed like the butt of it came unhinged). Fascinating!

Jay

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
    I came up with this idea a few years ago for a different book I'm planning to write, but then I thought it would work well in this story, so I decided to use it here. The next chapter will give a more in-depth description of how it works. I don't know if a thing like this is really possible, but maybe there's an Abby out there somewhere who could figure out how to do it?
Comment from Ulla
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Yeah, just imagine if a golfing suite could be invented teaching the right swing.
Now, I came to golfin my very early forties and I immediately loved it an the competitiveness against yourself. Suffice to say, that I ended up with a good handicap. Now, I liked this story on a lot. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for the good review. I sure would have liked such a golfing suit when I first learned to play!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Abby has an incredible idea and it is a way more interesting job than her present one. I can understand about her daughter's swing. Tried playing a few times with my mother. The golf course where she played lost an acre of land and had a 45-foot hole behind a tall hill. I had a terrible slice and put the ball in the hole with one swing. She never forgave me or took me golfing again. Has the invention Abby wants to make actually been invented? I sure can see how it would work.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Not to my knowledge it hasn't been invented. I dreamed it up myself. I'm not sure if it's really possible, but it sounds like a neat invention.
reply by Carol Hillebrenner on 28-Jan-2023
    They had Tiger Woods in a suit that followed all his actions when they made a game out of his golf game. Maybe that was halfway there.
Comment from royowen
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I love the progress of your book Jim. The entry of Dana into the series is always interesting, school bullies can be that way for a number of reasons, but she doesn't seem to have a reason other than a meanness of spirit, now Abby is changing to a career shift. Usually athletes are good at anything physical, Beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Dana has pretty much gotten away with being hot stuff and a bully all her life. Let's see how she fares against a mature, no longer timid Abby.
reply by royowen on 28-Jan-2023
    She won?t like it
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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What an interesting idea! I can't wait to see how this plays out and where Dana comes in. I know she will. This is getting better and better. Thank you for sharing this with us. I'm loving the story.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    You're very kind, Barbara. Thank you so much. You're right about Dana!
Comment from Daniel Fernandes
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This is wonderful. Love the passion you put in this. I would have to read the other chapters and put everything together but this chapter is amazing. Conversations are great and it pulled me wondering what will happen next. Thank you for sharing this. Keep up the good work. Write on!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much, Daniel. I'm happy you found the story. I put out a chapter a day which I always promote. There are only 8 left before the end, but they promise to be exciting. Hope you stay with it until the end.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I feel as though I am entering into the Twilight Zone, or Bizzaro World. A golf suit with electronic sensors. y m b k! Oh, well, there s always tomorrow to see where this goes.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Wish I had one of those!