Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a well-written free verse entry to this contest. The text is a great size. The message while eerie is stated with clarity.
Your poem looks as if has been squeezed into the poem box. Create space around your poem and it will present better. Go to the beginning of the first line and hit enter twice. Go to the end of the last line and hit enter twice. Now you have a better frame of space around your poem.
Lastly, your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Thanks for the read and the suggestion. I will edit.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a ghostly write as this early morning mist and sunlight has produced this imaginary apparition bringing back some memories here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

Maybe she was imaginary. Thanks for the read and the comments, pleased you enjoyed.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You painted a lovely, ethereal picture with your beautifully flowing words. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read and for the encouraging review.