My Angels Heart
The gifts she gave me,49 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a wonderful tribute to a Lady whose life may have taken on a new persona but has never left the hearts and minds of those she has joined God and her husband in creating. She may be in heaven but her impact is still here. Thanks.
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This is a wonderful tribute to a Lady whose life may have taken on a new persona but has never left the hearts and minds of those she has joined God and her husband in creating. She may be in heaven but her impact is still here. Thanks.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
Comment from MissMerri
I truly enjoyed how you carried the metaphor of the garden so beautifully throughout the entire poem, even mentioning how each "petal" is different and unique, how they were planted and given to you by your angel. It is so poetic and the meter and rhymes only add to its beauty. I enjoyed this very much, Willie.
~ MM
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I truly enjoyed how you carried the metaphor of the garden so beautifully throughout the entire poem, even mentioning how each "petal" is different and unique, how they were planted and given to you by your angel. It is so poetic and the meter and rhymes only add to its beauty. I enjoyed this very much, Willie.
~ MM
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Miss Merri, Thank you for the exceptional review. Your reviews mean
a lot to me. Thank you, tor the coveted six stars. Willie
Comment from Sugarray77
How beautifully and eloquently written!! I love the sentiment you have shared about your lovely garden of children and how each one is unique. Well done. It is a very lovely read.
Melissa
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How beautifully and eloquently written!! I love the sentiment you have shared about your lovely garden of children and how each one is unique. Well done. It is a very lovely read.
Melissa
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is absolutely beautiful. Comparing the beloved family members to.oetals of a flower that represents family is a strike of genius. Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
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This is absolutely beautiful. Comparing the beloved family members to.oetals of a flower that represents family is a strike of genius. Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
Comment from tfawcus
It's a good metaphor. As someone once said, care for a young child and a garden is much the same: keep its face clean and its bottom dry. It sounds as though you have delightful children.
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It's a good metaphor. As someone once said, care for a young child and a garden is much the same: keep its face clean and its bottom dry. It sounds as though you have delightful children.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I know how you feel. My children are the best in my life, they are my treasure.
I like the flowers personification. Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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I know how you feel. My children are the best in my life, they are my treasure.
I like the flowers personification. Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
Comment from royowen
Yes, children are our legacy, our reward from God, they are the arrows in our quiver, the hope of the future and the hope of a nation, this is a beautifully written love tribute, and an inspired post Willie, well done, blessings Roy
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Yes, children are our legacy, our reward from God, they are the arrows in our quiver, the hope of the future and the hope of a nation, this is a beautifully written love tribute, and an inspired post Willie, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Willie,
A very nice tribute to your wife. She brought you home a garden of love, your four children.
"She nourished the garden and watched it grow.
Each petal different as a flake of snow.
Tended with love, they got a good start
Each petal a part of my Angel's heart."
I'm sorry for your loss. However, enjoy your children!
Cheers,
Kimbob
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Hi Willie,
A very nice tribute to your wife. She brought you home a garden of love, your four children.
"She nourished the garden and watched it grow.
Each petal different as a flake of snow.
Tended with love, they got a good start
Each petal a part of my Angel's heart."
I'm sorry for your loss. However, enjoy your children!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aw, that is so lovely, Willie, what an incredible family you have. I especially love the way you call them your garden. I love how you brought your darling wife into it, how she brought the flowers to your door. I just love this poem, well done! :))Sandra xx
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Aw, that is so lovely, Willie, what an incredible family you have. I especially love the way you call them your garden. I love how you brought your darling wife into it, how she brought the flowers to your door. I just love this poem, well done! :))Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aw, that is so lovely, Willie, what an incredible family you have. I especially love the way you call them your garden. I love how you brought your darling wife into it, how she brought the flowers to your door. I just love this poem, well done! :))Sandra xx
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Aw, that is so lovely, Willie, what an incredible family you have. I especially love the way you call them your garden. I love how you brought your darling wife into it, how she brought the flowers to your door. I just love this poem, well done! :))Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
