Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

They all have to meet eventually with death some people call to Grim Reaper others the great sleep and when it comes to the light we know everything is going above and will be all right well written thanks for sharing Dr Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023

Thank you very much I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am positive Dean Kuch would enjoy reading this poem and I am positive he is smiling down upon it now. Thank you for sharing this beautifully written tribute with us.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you, Barbara, I think you are right (*=*) I appreciate your kind review. I hope you are having a pleasant day.

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Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your free verse- excellent picture presentation- good imagination!! Death taking yet another - beyond on a long road to the other side-did you mean to say 'starts' ? Good job AP

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

When I started reading your poem it reminded me of a frightening event (death) or character. Then I noticed there was the poem that Emily Dickenson wrote. She is a wonderful poet. I like your style of writing, too.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Gypsy, This is a very well written free verse dedicated to Dean - May he rest in peace. You used very good descriptive words and art work went well with your words. love, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A beautiful poem which starts us on our travels beyond this earthly existence. I liked that you dedicated this to Dean who often wrote about death. He is now writing to entertain angels.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy, if a macabre subject. I've simply decided I will not comply. I'll look like The Picture of Dorian Gray, sure, but I can deal with that!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

Comment from Shirley Rebstock

Excellent

Takes the reader through your imagination and creativity. Well done, interesting. Look forward to more of your creative work. This expressed a fear of death, which all humans hope for an easy passage to the beyond.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

A wonderful read on your thoughts about passing from one world to another, this transition is so peaceful, "on our way beyond" very well written and presented****kahpot

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy

Comment from Mrs. KT

Exceptional

Hello, Gypsy!
As a stand-alone, your Free Verse poem is well-crafted, and surely echoes the poetic thoughts of Miss Emily.
As a tribute to Dean, well, it goes without saying, that your offering is exceptional.
How I, too, miss that man...

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023

Thank you, Diane, I appreciate your kind Exceptional six stars review. I hope you are having an awesome day.

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