Lacey's Lost Weekend
Her heritage marked her as Inhuman4 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Wow, I didn't know you wrote horror stories, Cass! But you told the story very well. Though I knew nothing about werewolves, you taught me some things about them. And even better, you added a Christian theme of Lacey sacrificing herself to save the rest of the town as well as Guthrie. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Wow, I didn't know you wrote horror stories, Cass! But you told the story very well. Though I knew nothing about werewolves, you taught me some things about them. And even better, you added a Christian theme of Lacey sacrificing herself to save the rest of the town as well as Guthrie. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Dear Helen, Thank you for your review and the five stars. I'm not sure where this came from, it came out of thin air and I went with it. I'll be more careful next time. cheers Cass
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Interesting take on an repeated story. Well done, though why I muse did lacey have to die? Remorse? Regret? She was doing what werewolves do. ...............................................
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Interesting take on an repeated story. Well done, though why I muse did lacey have to die? Remorse? Regret? She was doing what werewolves do. ...............................................
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Lacey sacrificed herself so she wouldn't take any more lives. She hated what she'd become and wanted "Out" Once the silver blade had worked on Guthrie she knew she had a way out.
cheers Cass
Comment from prettybluebirds
One suggestion. The story will be easier to read if you put a little space between the paragraphs. The words are all jumbled together, which makes it difficult to read. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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One suggestion. The story will be easier to read if you put a little space between the paragraphs. The words are all jumbled together, which makes it difficult to read. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Dear Bluebird, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Kudos also for your suggestion of putting more "air" in the formatting. I have followed your thoughts and done so and am pleased with the result, cheers Cass
Comment from jessizero
This was an excellent story for the "alone" contest. I enjoyed it from the beginning to the very end. Thank you for sharing your story, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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This was an excellent story for the "alone" contest. I enjoyed it from the beginning to the very end. Thank you for sharing your story, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Dear Jessiezero, Thank you for your review and THE AWESOME SIX STARS. iT'S MOST GENEROUS OF YOU AND I AM TRULY TOUCHED,
This is my first foray into horror,Not bad for a first attempt.
cheers Cass
