Remembrance
Even after death, you never stop loving a parent.107 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
The love that a child has for their mother in unlike any other love. As powerful a statement that is, I find it hard to contemplate that some children actually express hatred for their mother. True some mothers are that in name only, and have never earned the title. I did not appreciate mine until she was gone. It has been 16 years now and I am still discovering how much my mother loved me and feeling guilt for some of the heartache I caused her. While I cannot undo what I did, I can at least feel remorse over it.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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The love that a child has for their mother in unlike any other love. As powerful a statement that is, I find it hard to contemplate that some children actually express hatred for their mother. True some mothers are that in name only, and have never earned the title. I did not appreciate mine until she was gone. It has been 16 years now and I am still discovering how much my mother loved me and feeling guilt for some of the heartache I caused her. While I cannot undo what I did, I can at least feel remorse over it.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. Mothers are pretty special, and I wish everyone could understand that. I'm sure your mom knew how much you loved her; they have a sixth sense about that, even when we're going through our rebellious stages. Thank you again for reviewing. Take care. :D
Comment from Aussie
"She is not dead, merely sleeping." Your mom would be proud of you writing about her. They are never forgotten, memories spring forth from youth to adulthood. Good time, smell of cooking, mom's loving hand guiding the family daily. K xx
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"She is not dead, merely sleeping." Your mom would be proud of you writing about her. They are never forgotten, memories spring forth from youth to adulthood. Good time, smell of cooking, mom's loving hand guiding the family daily. K xx
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. Yes, I always feel her beside me, especially when I'm teaching. Thank you again for reviewing. Take care. :D
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice moving short poem about remembering your mother. We all have memories of those who we have lost and it seems that we all have lost a lot of people due to COVID, guns and overdoses.
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nice moving short poem about remembering your mother. We all have memories of those who we have lost and it seems that we all have lost a lot of people due to COVID, guns and overdoses.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm grateful I still have these memories that keep her close to my heart, even though she can't be with me physically. Thank you again. Take care. :D
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Lovely 3 lines poem. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. The subject touched my heart because my mother died when I was ten but still miss her. Good luck in the contest.
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Lovely 3 lines poem. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. The subject touched my heart because my mother died when I was ten but still miss her. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm so sorry for your loss. Thank you again for your review. Take care. :D
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful 3 line poem that says so much. My mother passed 10 years ago and while she was older, I do miss her and would love one more visit or phone call to tell her how much I love her.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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A beautiful 3 line poem that says so much. My mother passed 10 years ago and while she was older, I do miss her and would love one more visit or phone call to tell her how much I love her.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Janet. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm sorry for your loss. Yes, I wish I could have one more day with my mom too. Thank you again. Take care. :D
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a simple and heartfelt poem about grief and loss. It mirrors what most feel about losing a mother. Sorry for your loss. My mom died of lung cancer.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This is a simple and heartfelt poem about grief and loss. It mirrors what most feel about losing a mother. Sorry for your loss. My mom died of lung cancer.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Joan. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm sorry for your loss as well. Thank you again for your review. Take care. :D
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No problem, A.
Thanks for the empathy.
P S If you would like, can you give me your first name
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You're welcome. It's Amber. :D
Comment from amahra
What a wonderful poem. Yes, it's true. I think I love my father more after decades of his death than I ever did when he was alive. However, I loved him very much alive. Thank you for your lovely poem.
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What a wonderful poem. Yes, it's true. I think I love my father more after decades of his death than I ever did when he was alive. However, I loved him very much alive. Thank you for your lovely poem.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, amahra. I appreciate it and your feedback. It's amazing how much love we can have for our parents and then it seems to double in size after we lose them. Thank you again for reviewing. Take care. :D
Comment from Sally Law
Welcome to FanStory! I can relate as my mother died of a mestastic cancer in 2002. I miss her every day. My condolences in your great loss.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Welcome to FanStory! I can relate as my mother died of a mestastic cancer in 2002. I miss her every day. My condolences in your great loss.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. Thank you! I love it here. I'm so sorry for your loss too. One day I hope we find those cures people are searching for, so we can eradicate diseases like cancer. Thank you again for reviewing. Take care. :D
Comment from Ginda Simpson
In its simplicity, your poem tells us of loss and grief, and then acceptance. It is a beautiful love poem and is a good entry for the 3 line poetry contest. Best of luck.
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In its simplicity, your poem tells us of loss and grief, and then acceptance. It is a beautiful love poem and is a good entry for the 3 line poetry contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. Thank you so much! Take care. :D
Comment from Terry Broxson
You have written an excellent three-line poem for this contest, good luck. The message in your poem captures the feeling of a multitude of emotions for a lot of people. Very well done. Terry.
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You have written an excellent three-line poem for this contest, good luck. The message in your poem captures the feeling of a multitude of emotions for a lot of people. Very well done. Terry.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Terry. I appreciate it and your feedback. Take care. :D
