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Nightfall

We don't always end up with the one we want.

51 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Excellent
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This story is wonderfully written. If you continue reading it is fine but if you lose thought, you have to start over in the beginning. Did the fellow die in a car accident and then return as an angel?

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Thank you, Rosemary Everson1, for your review. I appreciate it. Yes, he died and returned as a ghost, kept here by his lingering feelings for his friend; yet, he could move on when he saw her fall in love with someone else. Glad you enjoy it, and again, I appreciate your feedback. Take care! :D