Some Call It Luck
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Comment from royowen
I guess EJ Had to diminish while Kenny became favoured, certainly for Abby's sake, so the case of EJ, is still friendship, and Lester has realised that Kenny's not that bad either, certainly clever old Lester, dogs or cats always seem to favour one or the other. Beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
I guess EJ Had to diminish while Kenny became favoured, certainly for Abby's sake, so the case of EJ, is still friendship, and Lester has realised that Kenny's not that bad either, certainly clever old Lester, dogs or cats always seem to favour one or the other. Beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Yep, you've pretty much got it. Thanks, Roy.
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Well done
Comment from Jay Squires
This was quite a touching chapter with Lester's and Kenny's friendship at the end. The previewing of Lester's habits of bringing cat-kill up to the doorway helped lay the foundation for the choking incident and the kitty Heimlich. Good job.
"He then started licking his front paws" [This is the second sentence in a row that you started with, "He then". It creates an annoying echo that you can readily hear if you read your text aloud.]
It's amazing how little incidents like the cat-choking one can cement a relationship, and even turn the corner. This is really developing into a fine story.
Jay
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
This was quite a touching chapter with Lester's and Kenny's friendship at the end. The previewing of Lester's habits of bringing cat-kill up to the doorway helped lay the foundation for the choking incident and the kitty Heimlich. Good job.
"He then started licking his front paws" [This is the second sentence in a row that you started with, "He then". It creates an annoying echo that you can readily hear if you read your text aloud.]
It's amazing how little incidents like the cat-choking one can cement a relationship, and even turn the corner. This is really developing into a fine story.
Jay
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Hey, great catch with the consecutive "he thens." I must have read this over 20 times and never caught that. Thanks, and thanks for the good review.
Comment from Kaiku
The story continues. A little action with the cat and a pleasant ending. Have you finished this book and are posting chapters or are you posting as you finish a chapter? Kind of curious as to your final chapter count.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
The story continues. A little action with the cat and a pleasant ending. Have you finished this book and are posting chapters or are you posting as you finish a chapter? Kind of curious as to your final chapter count.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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The book is written and we are a little over the halfway point now. If it ever gets published, it will be about a 300 page book (80,000 words).
The "chapters" I'm including in FanStory are not the actual chapters in the book, because some of them are too long, and I have to break them up for FanStory.
Comment from jmdg1954
It was only a matter of time before Lester and Kenny would become friends.
Does the Heimlich Maneuver really work on cats?
Keep up the good work.
Cheers... John
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
It was only a matter of time before Lester and Kenny would become friends.
Does the Heimlich Maneuver really work on cats?
Keep up the good work.
Cheers... John
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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I researched it, and it actually can be used on cats and dogs.
Thanks for the good review, John.
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Good to know since we have 3fogs.