Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation. The poem is sesual. I like the fire and passion metaphor.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You did a great job with your three lines, and your syllable count was correct. This was a beautiful poem to a loved one. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

I am a fan of Cleo85's work. Your poem is perfectly highlighted by this piece of art. Two soulmates waltzing through life. Beautiful sentiments captured in just three short lines.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Author,
This is a very passionate poem in which You capture your feelings in just three lines. Very beautiful.
Your photo defines your fiery words. (No pun intended).
Good luck with this excellent poem.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

I loved this 3-liner, Kahpot! It was sensual, and the last line took you in a different direction depending on how you emphasized the sentence. Great Job! Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

How lovely to have a loving flame that can never go out. Your poem is filled with loving sentiments and I loved those thoughts, good luck with the contest, this is one of the best entries I have read so far, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This is great. Right from that picture, through to those carefully chosen words. It's a complete package which is so nice to see. The most important aspect, though, are the words and these stand on their own.

The only critique I have is to have another think about the title. The poem is much more enigmatic and the title is rather mundane. Spend some time rolling around some ideas which mirror the passion and feeling exposed by the poem.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, yes the title worries me as well, I have been thinking but to no avail, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

While the first layer is perhaps physical love, I see that true love which is not able to be extinguished offers a second layer, that of being truly and forever drawn to one person. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Ah, yes, those inextinguishable desires make for the beloved one to be even more desired. Great word play for the one who's is the poet's flame that ignites and can't be extinguished.

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Sounds to me like you're in love with lust, Kahpot. ;) There are worse things to be in love with, but don't forget the rest of the package!
Loved this, very sweet.
Susan :)

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, for both men and women lust can be for the body, mind, and or the whole package, for me that's my secret, as always very much appreciated****kahpot