One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from JT traveller
The poem reads well but I do not understand the inclusion of the term, "wiggles", a nice poem. It must be cold where you live. Best of luck and happy new year.
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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The poem reads well but I do not understand the inclusion of the term, "wiggles", a nice poem. It must be cold where you live. Best of luck and happy new year.
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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It's poetic personification of the wind blowing through the trees.
Thank you
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Psithyrus is the word. Thankyou for your contribution l. Have a great day.
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Psithyrus is the word. Thankyou for your contribution l. Have a great day.
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Yes, that's right but I don't like the sound of Psithyrus. LoL
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
love the feeling of your poem. I am not a lover of snow, but the images do bring the beauty of the trees. Being you live in a sunny state of warmth, would you like to feel the fluffy snowflake?
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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love the feeling of your poem. I am not a lover of snow, but the images do bring the beauty of the trees. Being you live in a sunny state of warmth, would you like to feel the fluffy snowflake?
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei Word Weaver
Comment from Mary Shifman
You have created a magnificent combination of poem and image. It's breathtaking. I would hang that on my wall in a heartbeat if I had a working printer. If I had any more sixes, you would have one. I hope you have a Happy New Year.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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You have created a magnificent combination of poem and image. It's breathtaking. I would hang that on my wall in a heartbeat if I had a working printer. If I had any more sixes, you would have one. I hope you have a Happy New Year.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei Word Weaver
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You are welcome.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, as time is ever moving, ever changing, then so too is the vista around, only in eternity is there nothing ruled by change, how can one change perfection. Beautifully written Gypsy, HNY blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Oh yes, as time is ever moving, ever changing, then so too is the vista around, only in eternity is there nothing ruled by change, how can one change perfection. Beautifully written Gypsy, HNY blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Roy,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You created an atmosphere of ice and snow with a spread of snowy white here and I enjoyed the scene described, a picturesque presentation of the chilly winter, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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You created an atmosphere of ice and snow with a spread of snowy white here and I enjoyed the scene described, a picturesque presentation of the chilly winter, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Dolly,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for presenting this beautiful package of artwork and a Haiku that matches it for perfectly. I think snow is so beautiful and do miss it. A friend living in Montana sent me a picture from her window. I was so jealous. LOL
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thank you for presenting this beautiful package of artwork and a Haiku that matches it for perfectly. I think snow is so beautiful and do miss it. A friend living in Montana sent me a picture from her window. I was so jealous. LOL
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Barbara, I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. The dual picture were so delightful and creative. As were your words, they also were creative in that nature provided the pallet of whiteness. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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What a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. The dual picture were so delightful and creative. As were your words, they also were creative in that nature provided the pallet of whiteness. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Aryr, I'm happy you enjoyed this haiku.
Blessed be and Gypsy hugs.
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
As a painter I am always challenging myself to keep my images simple. You achieve this with words. This is exquisite in its simplicity and yet loaded with meaning.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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As a painter I am always challenging myself to keep my images simple. You achieve this with words. This is exquisite in its simplicity and yet loaded with meaning.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Ginda, I'm happy you enjoyed this haiku. Thank you for the outstanding review. Happy new year!
Blessed be and Gypsy hugs.
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written 4/7/6 haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written 4/7/6 haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello dear Gypsy... the verb doesn't match the noun. Cold wind wiggles... cold winds wiggle... am I wrong??? A superb theme and I dearly love the satori line about our Creator. Very nice.
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Hello dear Gypsy... the verb doesn't match the noun. Cold wind wiggles... cold winds wiggle... am I wrong??? A superb theme and I dearly love the satori line about our Creator. Very nice.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Melissa,
You are right, I fixed that error. Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and help with my grammar. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei
