Infectionous Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Feeling the Bad"Poetry that is different.
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Comment from Earl Corp
You really made Covid -19 sound kind of sexy by making it a siren. I hope this isn't autobiographical and you're doing well very nice job. Stay safe and healthy in the new year.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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You really made Covid -19 sound kind of sexy by making it a siren. I hope this isn't autobiographical and you're doing well very nice job. Stay safe and healthy in the new year.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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I've been trying to stay healthy but sometimes a man's got to do what a man's got to do!
Yes, no matter what especially, since I had to ride a bicycle to get my medication.
Why?
Well because all the people with cars were too damn busy for me!
But thanks and the book is quickly becoming a winner
Maybe a good idea?
Ricky
Comment from Nicki Nance
Having outrun COVID with all precautions and as much OCD as the law would allow, I was unpleasantly surprised to find myself gasping along with you. I liked your strategic mispellings - a great way to get a reader like me to stop and reread . If that was not purposeful, you are writing with an extraordinarily intuitive pen.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Having outrun COVID with all precautions and as much OCD as the law would allow, I was unpleasantly surprised to find myself gasping along with you. I liked your strategic mispellings - a great way to get a reader like me to stop and reread . If that was not purposeful, you are writing with an extraordinarily intuitive pen.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Yes I occasionally make up my own words but I tried to explain them in the next sentence like I will use the word, "Eye" instead of "I"
Then talk about something that has to do with seeing or vision.
You will notice the book is getting very deep with the next two chapters and thanks for reviewing this Nicki.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Teri7
This is very interesting what you have penned. You used very good descriptive words. My dad was in the navy also. He was a cook at one time there. I remember my mom telling us of going on board the ship and eating a hamburger with him and his little pet raccoon. That was so long ago. Thanks for sharing. Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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This is very interesting what you have penned. You used very good descriptive words. My dad was in the navy also. He was a cook at one time there. I remember my mom telling us of going on board the ship and eating a hamburger with him and his little pet raccoon. That was so long ago. Thanks for sharing. Blessings Teri
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thanks again Teri7.
And, you'll notice this book getting much deeper as I get much sicker!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from lancellot
This is very interesting. I think there will always be new strains of COVID. That is something that will stick with humanity for many years to come.
You may want to add a space between the end and where you begin your notes.
Good work.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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This is very interesting. I think there will always be new strains of COVID. That is something that will stick with humanity for many years to come.
You may want to add a space between the end and where you begin your notes.
Good work.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thanks Lancelot and you'll notice the book getting much deeper as I get much sicker.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm continually praying. These words may have purposely been misspelled)
Shortly i'm at Deaths Door for sure? (I'm)
Knot my time now and what the Heck? (Not)
How long curled blonde hair Sea-fiiled with *Jell and shell! (Sea-filled)
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She's only Nineteen but wants and kneeds me with her soothing voice. (needs)
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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I'm continually praying. These words may have purposely been misspelled)
Shortly i'm at Deaths Door for sure? (I'm)
Knot my time now and what the Heck? (Not)
How long curled blonde hair Sea-fiiled with *Jell and shell! (Sea-filled)
...
She's only Nineteen but wants and kneeds me with her soothing voice. (needs)
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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If you read further into this Barbara.
Yes, you will notice there's a disclaimer about the use of the words.
So, I would suggest you reread it and thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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I saw that, but just wanted to make sure. That's why I said something about them being purposely misspelled.