Daydreams from the Ashes
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "For Rex"Poems and meditations
7 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Wow, what a deep and beautiful expression of friendship. In the telling, you invite us to know not just your friend, but also who you are. And I would feel privileged to know both. Simply exquisite.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Wow, what a deep and beautiful expression of friendship. In the telling, you invite us to know not just your friend, but also who you are. And I would feel privileged to know both. Simply exquisite.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and leaving such a lovely review. I really appreciate your time and attention. It was a poem I had to think about a lot and not at all at the same time, so I'm glad it came out well enough that you like it.
Comment from royowen
The one thing I know about people is never to revere them too much, they know that they will let you down at some stage, we can provide hope a value to people to a point, but we know we sometimes teeter on the edge, only God deserves such trust. This is divinely inspired, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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The one thing I know about people is never to revere them too much, they know that they will let you down at some stage, we can provide hope a value to people to a point, but we know we sometimes teeter on the edge, only God deserves such trust. This is divinely inspired, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. We've definitely let each other down a time or two, but for the most part, I couldn't have asked for a better friend.
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Well done
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A poem of sincerity, almost like an ode in tone! This is a genuine tribute to a friend/lover. It speaks of tough love, suggesting a trust and belief in
his judgement which has helped you accept criticism at times. I like the intimacy suggested by the font.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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A poem of sincerity, almost like an ode in tone! This is a genuine tribute to a friend/lover. It speaks of tough love, suggesting a trust and belief in
his judgement which has helped you accept criticism at times. I like the intimacy suggested by the font.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! He's definitely a critic, but I have learned to enjoy showing him my work. I'm glad it came out well.
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Happy New Year!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute to someone you care and admire and I enjoyed the journey here, a dedicated gardener weeding out the thorns and praising faith with friendship and a loving heart, much enjoyed, fine words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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A fine tribute to someone you care and admire and I enjoyed the journey here, a dedicated gardener weeding out the thorns and praising faith with friendship and a loving heart, much enjoyed, fine words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I wanted some opinions for it before handing it over.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a beautiful tribute to your friend, Rex. It is so skillfully written that it is a delightful read. I enjoyed every word of this touching writing. It is lovely beynd words. Nice writing.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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This is a beautiful tribute to your friend, Rex. It is so skillfully written that it is a delightful read. I enjoyed every word of this touching writing. It is lovely beynd words. Nice writing.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. The feedback made me feel better about having given it over.
Comment from kiwisteveh
I take it this is a genuine tribute to an actual friend, Rex, and what a delightful tribute it is, full of wonderful imagery and precise examples of how this man makes your own life better.
There seems to be one 'if' statement near the middle which doesn't reach a natural conclusion: '...if you could see as I have seen:
the beauty of your determined faith;' then what?
Delightful poem. Well done.
Steve
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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I take it this is a genuine tribute to an actual friend, Rex, and what a delightful tribute it is, full of wonderful imagery and precise examples of how this man makes your own life better.
There seems to be one 'if' statement near the middle which doesn't reach a natural conclusion: '...if you could see as I have seen:
the beauty of your determined faith;' then what?
Delightful poem. Well done.
Steve
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. It is indeed for a friend by that name. I'll look and see what I can do about completing the thought. I appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from Earl Corp
I had a hard time following this maybe if you explained what you're writing about in your authors notes. Have a merry Christmas and stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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I had a hard time following this maybe if you explained what you're writing about in your authors notes. Have a merry Christmas and stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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I am sorry it was hard to understand, but I appreciate the well wishes. I hope you have a wonderful day and a great Christmas as well.
