Some Call It Luck
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Comment from Kayte Ray
You present a complete picture here with nice flow and easy reading. I might suggest that in the future you increase font size a little. Right now with the smaller font it does not scream for the reader to engage with your work.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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You present a complete picture here with nice flow and easy reading. I might suggest that in the future you increase font size a little. Right now with the smaller font it does not scream for the reader to engage with your work.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the great review and the suggestion. I will do that.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
I really enjoyed this chapter. The description of EJ hitting the ball into the distant hole is very well described. You capture his feelings of joy perfectly and I like the idea of the Lucky ball!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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I really enjoyed this chapter. The description of EJ hitting the ball into the distant hole is very well described. You capture his feelings of joy perfectly and I like the idea of the Lucky ball!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Sarah. That lucky ball plays a rather significant role in E.J.'s future.
