Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Belated sympathy. I just finished reading this post. By now you are probably at home after your ordeal.
The story is finally where this ex of Alexandra needs to be locked up for abuse. He finally has gotten himself into a pickle of a situation.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Belated sympathy. I just finished reading this post. By now you are probably at home after your ordeal.
The story is finally where this ex of Alexandra needs to be locked up for abuse. He finally has gotten himself into a pickle of a situation.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the support. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Soledadpaz
Terrible statistics. Unfortunately, believable. I like how Cordero is so solicitous of Alexandra, but it made me wish he would take her to the doctor more quickly. Looks like she got it pretty bad. Wondering who Chip is. Did he do that to Alexandra?
Definitely intriguing.
Sol
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Terrible statistics. Unfortunately, believable. I like how Cordero is so solicitous of Alexandra, but it made me wish he would take her to the doctor more quickly. Looks like she got it pretty bad. Wondering who Chip is. Did he do that to Alexandra?
Definitely intriguing.
Sol
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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The storm and flashflooding prohibited it, but he is a veternarian so was looking after her. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Quiet Lawyer Chapter 24"
Was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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"Quiet Lawyer Chapter 24"
Was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is another great chapter. Your cowboy rules were fun and a very good idea. I am so sorry about the loss of your father-in-law. God be with him as he enters his next life and with you as you travel. Pittsfield is less than 45 miles from where I live just five miles east of Quincy.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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This is another great chapter. Your cowboy rules were fun and a very good idea. I am so sorry about the loss of your father-in-law. God be with him as he enters his next life and with you as you travel. Pittsfield is less than 45 miles from where I live just five miles east of Quincy.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your support. I have been to Quincy many times. It's a small world. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
They run into who harmed Ali the gunfight at the OK corral will look like child's play.
Sorry about your lose, not good!
Hope all goes well with that situation.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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They run into who harmed Ali the gunfight at the OK corral will look like child's play.
Sorry about your lose, not good!
Hope all goes well with that situation.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I happened on to this. Liked it and wanted to fan you but when I went to your page it didn't give me that option. I don't know why but hope I can remember to try it again. I will search back and read what came before. Well done. I love western stories and poems. Hope to fan you soon. Nancy
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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I happened on to this. Liked it and wanted to fan you but when I went to your page it didn't give me that option. I don't know why but hope I can remember to try it again. I will search back and read what came before. Well done. I love western stories and poems. Hope to fan you soon. Nancy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I would love to have you for a fan.
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I tried to fan you again and I still can't do it.Maybe you need to weed out the fans who are no longer active, There may not be room for more. I would love to be notified when you post. Nancy.
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I did that a few weeks ago.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You have moved the story along nicely. I d not see any room for improvement. I am sorry for the loss of your father-in-law. Have the best blessed day you can.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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This is another excellent chapter. You have moved the story along nicely. I d not see any room for improvement. I am sorry for the loss of your father-in-law. Have the best blessed day you can.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your support and kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
It's good the Cordero has such a good family and Ali finally is around decent people and a kind and caring man like Cordero. Even the workers are so thoughtful like bringing breakfast.
Thanks for the updates on your travels. Please keep safe. I am glad you have a date set and hope your whole extended family will be blessed by being together even if it's for such a sad event.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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It's good the Cordero has such a good family and Ali finally is around decent people and a kind and caring man like Cordero. Even the workers are so thoughtful like bringing breakfast.
Thanks for the updates on your travels. Please keep safe. I am glad you have a date set and hope your whole extended family will be blessed by being together even if it's for such a sad event.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your support and thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great chapter, I enjoyed reading it. Your descriptive words bring the story to life. Good plot, interesting and easy to follow. Great imagery.
I'm glad Ali was taken cared of.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Great chapter, I enjoyed reading it. Your descriptive words bring the story to life. Good plot, interesting and easy to follow. Great imagery.
I'm glad Ali was taken cared of.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from amahra
Really liked the light-heartedness of the writing that quickly transitions from Alex's violent ordeal.
Bob said, "How about remove your gun before sitting at the dining table?" [Loved this line. LOL]
"You guys look like we're headed to the Okay Corral." [Great writing, here...instead of saying how well armed they were.]
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Really liked the light-heartedness of the writing that quickly transitions from Alex's violent ordeal.
Bob said, "How about remove your gun before sitting at the dining table?" [Loved this line. LOL]
"You guys look like we're headed to the Okay Corral." [Great writing, here...instead of saying how well armed they were.]
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
