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A unique friendship affects the course of 2 lives.
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Comment from
jmdg1954
I found this a good chapter which not only gives thought to the past, it is a stepping stone for what lies ahead for the reader.
Continue on, stay the course. To me it seems to be working.
Cheers, John
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
Thanks for the good review, John. It will take Abby a while to gain the confidence she needs to realize her potential.
Comment from
Sarah Das Gupta
You get into the character of Abby very well here. The sense of loss and abandonment are very well evoked! You have captured her sense of loneliness and abandonment.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
Thank you Sarah. I've had several false starts in developing Abby's character in the most interesting way. In my first draft, she was ultra-confident, even at a young age, and seemed impervious to the ill-treatment she received from her peers, but there was little room to grow as a character with this approach. I'm currently on my third draft of the novel, and I think she is more interesting this way.
reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 07-Dec-2022
You are on the right track!
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