Some Call It Luck
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Your story was a delight to read, and I loved the ending. It seems like there are always those who try to knock other people down in life. Your writing and grammar are flawless. Nice writing.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Your story was a delight to read, and I loved the ending. It seems like there are always those who try to knock other people down in life. Your writing and grammar are flawless. Nice writing.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much. I feel kind of sorry for those folks who take pleasure in knocking others down. It usually means that they live unfulfilled lives.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The relationship between Abby and Fred is developed. Fred's confidence is growing. Their success in skating is well described. You sometimes miss opportunities to write in greater depth about Abby's emotions and the strength of her feelings.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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The relationship between Abby and Fred is developed. Fred's confidence is growing. Their success in skating is well described. You sometimes miss opportunities to write in greater depth about Abby's emotions and the strength of her feelings.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Sarah. Bear with me, and you'll see much greater emotion in the next chapter.
