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A unique friendship affects the course of 2 lives.
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Comment from
jmdg1954
If this is a chapter in a book you're writing I'd like to read others.
For me it was simply and enjoyably written without the need of a dictionary (very much appreciated).
The story kept me in tune and waiting to see what happens next.
Charectors were lovable.
Thank you. John
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
Thank you, John. Your comments are much appreciated.
I will be attempting to get this book professionally published. The next chapter, coming out tomorrow, will be about the other main character and the contrasting Christmas Eve he has.
Comment from
Ginda Simpson
What lovely memories. With simple description, you paint an endearing picture of the Christmas traditions that seem to be disappearing. Your story serves to remind us how much we need to cherish and engage in family traditions. Thanks for sharing this story.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
Thank you for taking the time to read and review this chapter. It's much appreciated, Ginda. This scene was based on some of my own good memories of Christmas, that, as you said, seem to be disappearing.
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