Some Call It Luck
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Some Call It Luck - Chapter 5"A unique friendship affects the course of 2 lives.
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Comment from JoannaN
Your characters are likeable, and I hope they will have a good time together. I hope Abby and Fred will receive some narrative connected to their hobbies, interests (being a victim of bullying is only one facet of your life).
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Your characters are likeable, and I hope they will have a good time together. I hope Abby and Fred will receive some narrative connected to their hobbies, interests (being a victim of bullying is only one facet of your life).
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you for reading the chapter and for the good review, Joanna. We will soon learn of their interests and strengths.
Comment from Ricky1024
This Chspter #5 was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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This Chspter #5 was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Dr. Ricky, thanks for the review, but I will be muting you. I've asked you before to please not comment with the same canned review, as it is not helpful and takes the place of one of the two reviews I can get. Sorry.
