Some Call It Luck
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Comment from Ricky1024
This Chapter was well written deep in Theme design and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
ThNks and have a Blessed Thanksgiving.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This Chapter was well written deep in Theme design and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
ThNks and have a Blessed Thanksgiving.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thanks for the great review, Dr. Ricky. A blessed Thanksgiving to you too.
Comment from royowen
It sounds like a fabulous theme for a story, the job our hero was doing, was very similar to a job I was doing some years ago, in a plastics manufacturing company, after being self employed for years, I had lots of time to think, beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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It sounds like a fabulous theme for a story, the job our hero was doing, was very similar to a job I was doing some years ago, in a plastics manufacturing company, after being self employed for years, I had lots of time to think, beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Hey, Roy, thanks for the good review. I once had the exact job I described when I worked temporary jobs for Manpower. Fortunately, it was only a 1-day job. Believe it or not, the missing trunk key story also happened to me.
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Wow what a legacy, well done
Comment from Frank Malley
This is an good short piece that creates for the reader a bored, self-critical young man who drinks too much and falls asleep on his terrifically boring factory job. E.J., the central character, seems to have accepted his dysfunctional status in the world; when he is fired for falling asleep, he thinks about caddying as a next job, which, he thinks, doesn't require punching a time clock. I caddied briefly, and to get the loops you had to get to the caddyshack early, like 6a.m. I hope that further along in this story, E.J. selects a more promising road map for his future or faces dramatic events that compel him to come alive.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This is an good short piece that creates for the reader a bored, self-critical young man who drinks too much and falls asleep on his terrifically boring factory job. E.J., the central character, seems to have accepted his dysfunctional status in the world; when he is fired for falling asleep, he thinks about caddying as a next job, which, he thinks, doesn't require punching a time clock. I caddied briefly, and to get the loops you had to get to the caddyshack early, like 6a.m. I hope that further along in this story, E.J. selects a more promising road map for his future or faces dramatic events that compel him to come alive.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Not to worry. It will come.
