Activate The Intellect
A poem,45 total reviews
Comment from Brandon Clark
Excellently crafted and an important, poignant message as well! This applies to so many contemporary issues but the overarching theme of mankind's hubris being our folly is perfectly riddled out in this!
Thanks for posting a poem with a great message and well done!
Brandon
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Excellently crafted and an important, poignant message as well! This applies to so many contemporary issues but the overarching theme of mankind's hubris being our folly is perfectly riddled out in this!
Thanks for posting a poem with a great message and well done!
Brandon
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
Comment from DeboraDyess
I'm always amazed at your ability to create such a beautiful, compelling poem. YOur wordplay is phenomenal. I wonder if your brain works this way all the time. Amazing.
The poem is breath-taking. Your internal and external rhymes are perfect.
Well done!
Deb
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I'm always amazed at your ability to create such a beautiful, compelling poem. YOur wordplay is phenomenal. I wonder if your brain works this way all the time. Amazing.
The poem is breath-taking. Your internal and external rhymes are perfect.
Well done!
Deb
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, easy,
Excellent alliteration and internal rhyme. Well chosen melodic words.
The human experience in nature is the central concept in my favorite poetic form - haiku. Your poem, although is not a haiku it has a certain quality.
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Hello, easy,
Excellent alliteration and internal rhyme. Well chosen melodic words.
The human experience in nature is the central concept in my favorite poetic form - haiku. Your poem, although is not a haiku it has a certain quality.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
Comment from shelley kaye
beautiful poem!
love the part: "Do not abandon Nature"
that should be on a billboard everywhere lol
nice work - thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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beautiful poem!
love the part: "Do not abandon Nature"
that should be on a billboard everywhere lol
nice work - thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
Comment from karenina
Reading this poem is akin to taking a master class in alliteration, as well as internal rhyme... and your "pace" it all with a contemplative beat as I find myself doubling back and reading it again just for the sheer joy of the sound of the words rolling off my tongue! Here's to man and nature learning to live in camaraderie! (Wouldn't THAT be progress!?)
Karenina
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Reading this poem is akin to taking a master class in alliteration, as well as internal rhyme... and your "pace" it all with a contemplative beat as I find myself doubling back and reading it again just for the sheer joy of the sound of the words rolling off my tongue! Here's to man and nature learning to live in camaraderie! (Wouldn't THAT be progress!?)
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
Comment from Heather Knight
I have enjoyed this very much.
The content is interesting and the occasional alliteration and internal rhyme increase the beauty of your poem.
Thanks so much for sharing.
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I have enjoyed this very much.
The content is interesting and the occasional alliteration and internal rhyme increase the beauty of your poem.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
Comment from Gina Schneller
Hi there. This is such a deep poem. I actually read it two times to fully take it in. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your writing with us all! Best of luck in your writing journey!
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Hi there. This is such a deep poem. I actually read it two times to fully take it in. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your writing with us all! Best of luck in your writing journey!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
Comment from Nicki Nance
I read it twice just for the pleasure of it. This well crafted poem resonates with my own beliefs. Nature is the perfect juncture of science and spirit. My favorite sentiment here is to use our minds. I'm invested in the concept.Thank you for a great read.
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I read it twice just for the pleasure of it. This well crafted poem resonates with my own beliefs. Nature is the perfect juncture of science and spirit. My favorite sentiment here is to use our minds. I'm invested in the concept.Thank you for a great read.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
Comment from Goosey Gander
This poem is beautiful. Did you just make up your own rhyme scheme, or is it a poem type? The two lines, "Mankind has been immersed in loss and shed too many tears" is my absolute favorite, it portrays the meter very well. Congratulations on this poem, it's one of my new favorites.
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This poem is beautiful. Did you just make up your own rhyme scheme, or is it a poem type? The two lines, "Mankind has been immersed in loss and shed too many tears" is my absolute favorite, it portrays the meter very well. Congratulations on this poem, it's one of my new favorites.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
Comment from royowen
I guess hope is best summed up by hope. Once we lose that, there's no point. Creation has been deteriorating at an ever increasing rate, I have my theories about that, but my hope lies elsewhere, a place where the eye doesn't see, and it's ever increasing, beautifully written freestyle my friend, blessings Roy
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I guess hope is best summed up by hope. Once we lose that, there's no point. Creation has been deteriorating at an ever increasing rate, I have my theories about that, but my hope lies elsewhere, a place where the eye doesn't see, and it's ever increasing, beautifully written freestyle my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
