Magic of Snow
after a storm32 total reviews
Comment from amahra
I just never tire of these five-sever-five poems. This is a wonderful black and white artwork that meshes with the snow, dark trees, the black background, and the white test. Great job!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
I just never tire of these five-sever-five poems. This is a wonderful black and white artwork that meshes with the snow, dark trees, the black background, and the white test. Great job!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, your wee poem evokes such serenity, and it's peace sorely needed in these trying times. The syllable count is bang-on, and the picture chosen, perfect for the words.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
Ah, your wee poem evokes such serenity, and it's peace sorely needed in these trying times. The syllable count is bang-on, and the picture chosen, perfect for the words.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from karenina
Yes... It's like the earth is tucked in and sleeping in peaceful beauty.
I can't wait for our first snowfall!
It really is a magical thing to behold!
(Shove!ing? I could co without!)
Smile....
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
Yes... It's like the earth is tucked in and sleeping in peaceful beauty.
I can't wait for our first snowfall!
It really is a magical thing to behold!
(Shove!ing? I could co without!)
Smile....
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad to see you're back on here. Still praying that the effects are short-term! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
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Glad to be back! Things are slowly coming along!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written 5-7-5 poem. It has a nice overall presentation background and font. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
This is a beautifully written 5-7-5 poem. It has a nice overall presentation background and font. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
In Buffalo, our neighbor to the west, which received an unprecedented SEVENTY inches of it last week, that "quiet" probably only lasted until the first snowblower started. But the tableau of the picture you chose is serene-looking, indeed!! Nice 5-7-5 entry. I hope it does well!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
In Buffalo, our neighbor to the west, which received an unprecedented SEVENTY inches of it last week, that "quiet" probably only lasted until the first snowblower started. But the tableau of the picture you chose is serene-looking, indeed!! Nice 5-7-5 entry. I hope it does well!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Yes, that lake effect snow is crazy. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Aussie
I appreciated your contest entry and wish you well. Unfortunately, we don't have snow here in the sub tropics. The seasons are changing all over the world, not for the better. Australia is or was a land of droughts and floods - now we just have mighty floods. K xx
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
I appreciated your contest entry and wish you well. Unfortunately, we don't have snow here in the sub tropics. The seasons are changing all over the world, not for the better. Australia is or was a land of droughts and floods - now we just have mighty floods. K xx
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. Yes, seasons are changing. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Snowfall covers the world in silence at least for a time. This says so much about how the world needs solitude and quiet while winter months behold us and spread some peace and tranquility throughout the land. I love the sentiment of this short poem and all the promise it entails.
Have a lovely Thanksgiving!
Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
Snowfall covers the world in silence at least for a time. This says so much about how the world needs solitude and quiet while winter months behold us and spread some peace and tranquility throughout the land. I love the sentiment of this short poem and all the promise it entails.
Have a lovely Thanksgiving!
Jesse
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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So glad you enjoyed the poem, Jesse. Yes, we all need some peace and tranquility. Hope your Thanksgiving was lovely!
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It was great. I hope your Thanksgiving was wonderful as well.
Have a terrific weekend.
Jesse
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very gentle words that helped me to feel the softness and gentleness of the snow falling down. Great art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very gentle words that helped me to feel the softness and gentleness of the snow falling down. Great art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much, Teri, for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing! Exceptional work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing! Exceptional work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Ah, thank you so much for your kind words and the six stars! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Frances Jean
A delightful little Haiku obeying the requirements of the form with a glorious photo to accompany it. When my husband and I visited Canada a few years ago we marveled at the snow clad pine forest and the sun glinting off the droplets as it melted. Simply beautiful. Cheers Franky
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
A delightful little Haiku obeying the requirements of the form with a glorious photo to accompany it. When my husband and I visited Canada a few years ago we marveled at the snow clad pine forest and the sun glinting off the droplets as it melted. Simply beautiful. Cheers Franky
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.