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Comment from Dawn Munro
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First, your notes -- I love the idea of the question marks -- some special people like to keep things like their age a mystery. You have treated this with humor and grace, and there's no better recipient than lovely Jan.

I don't know the date either, but thanks to the heads-up, I can now wish her a great day. :)

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
    Dawn, I thank you so very much for your lovely review and comments about Jan's poem and also for her. You are always so sweet. When I finish your review I will be posting a poem that I wrote for your contest. I am excited to read others because when it comes to talking about God, we all are winners in His Love. Thank you for doing this. And in honor of Thanksgiving, as I meant to thank you yesterday as it was so hectic, but I am thankful for our growing friendship. I hope you had a very blessed day. Debi
reply by Dawn Munro on 25-Nov-2022
    I did have a blessed day, but my Thanksgiving is in October...*smile* I am Canadian.
    You're very welcome.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
    And LOL, I am your neighbor to the south. MN here. I knew you were from there, but wondered where in Canada?
reply by Dawn Munro on 25-Nov-2022
    Toronto, Ontario.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
    Here I was thinking that you were going to be way north of us, but Toronto is mixed in with the states and our beautiful lakes. I bet your area is gorgeous!
Comment from Aussie
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Happy Birthday Jan! Loved your poem for one special lady who works tirelessly helping others on fanstory.
She has borne more than her share of sorrows but did not give in - instead she threw her energy into writing and helping. I believe a death can start a life not lived. A chapter not yet read. I think brother Tim encourages her in her quest for good. K xx

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
    Thank you so very much Kay for such lovely comments for my poem and for Jan and for the awesome and generous gift of six stars in her honor. You are so very sweet and I meant to tell you this yesterday, but kinda overdid in therapy. I went to bed at 5 yesterday afternoon and just got up a little it ago. But just wanted you to know how thankful that I am for your friendship. I feel like I have known you for forever. God Bless you my friend.
reply by Aussie on 26-Nov-2022
    Hi Debi, Yes, I think we have known each other some time. We are both disabled but a smile is worth a thousand words. Love, Kay.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
    😊😘
reply by Aussie on 28-Nov-2022
    The only time no pain and I feel normal is in the heated swimming pool - do you go?
Comment from Ricky1024
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It's nice to honor our fellow fanstorians, especially on their birthdays.
(Besides just reviews)
...
Now this was well written rich in theme and imagery..
And it also, read well flowed well with no grammar issues.
Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful Thanksgiving..
Doctor Ricky1024

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Ricky. You are so kind and I know Jan will appreciate your awesome comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving.
    God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
Comment from Lilly Flowers
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Haha - your notes cracked me up. I guess you have to make sure no one makes assumptions. This was a fun-to-read poem about one of the Fan Story members. I'm sure she appreciates it. Hugs, Lilly

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Lily. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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The likelihood is many feel as you do but the title led me to believe it was a child of yours, and more than likely its Janpan ... right? You are kind to write such words. I would have saved the member cents though and sent it to her in a message. But that's me. My mom told me I am of English blood but as tight as I am I bet she meant Scottish instead.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    AH HA MY FRIEND. DON'T YOU REALIZE THAT WHAT EVER GETS THE REVIEWS, COUNT ON OUR RATING AND RANKING. SO IT REALLY MATTERS NOT TO ME HOW I GET IT, BECAUSE IT WAS A DOUBLE BLESSING THE WAY I LOOK AT IT. I GET THE FUN AND THE CREDIT, AND A FRIEND FEELS THE BLESSING. THERE IS NO GREATER FEELING THAN THAT OF DOING SOMETHING NICE FOR ANOTHER.
    KINDA SAYS SOMETHING LIKE THAT IN THE FIRST COMMANDMENT. ANYWAY, I DIDN'T MEAN IT TO SOUND LIKE A LECTURE, BUT INSTEAD WANT TO WISH YOU AND YOURS A VERY HAPPY THANKS GIVING!!
    AND LIKE RED USED TO SAY, AND GOD BLESS!!!
reply by Tom Horonzy on 23-Nov-2022
    You're nice, and back to you regarding the holiday.
Comment from Sanku
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lovely .jan is a very popular fanstory member It is clear from the birthday poems on her honour. .She introduces different forms of poems and encourages us to write.. This is a lovely tribute to her heart and the question marks was really fun.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Santha. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I know that many from other countries or even some here in the states, don't celebrate Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me.
    God Bless you and may He keep you and yours safe through the holiday season.
Comment from kiwisteveh
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A nice poem full of birthday wishes for your friend Jan. You may like to add a note to clarify as I believe we have more than one Jan amongst the membership.

Nice touch of humour with the question marks and a pleasing rhythm make this a pleasure to read.

Steve

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Steve,. You are so incredibly kind and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. I like your suggestion about add a note saying which Jan I am referring to.
    Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from Kaiku
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Always nice to raise a fellow colleague up and show one's friendship. The exchange of words without sight or sound often offers up its very own orchestra of brilliance. Nice poem for Jan.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Kaiku. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I know that many from other countries or even some here in the states, don't celebrate Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me.
    God Bless you and may He keep you and yours safe through the holiday season.
reply by Kaiku on 23-Nov-2022
    Thank you Debi.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your modified kyrielle is excellent in every respect~~skillfully written, vividly descriptive, naming specific qualities of the delightful, versatile Jan. I am sure she loves this.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Janice. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. So let me just tell you that I am so very thankful for our friendship. It truly means so much to me. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
reply by Janice Canerdy on 23-Nov-2022
    What a lovely message! Happy Thanksgiving. Janice
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I loved this. The ? marks made me laugh. Age is but a number. I loved the enthusiasm you have in this. You point out the sweetest things about Jan. And there are many. I have noticed that through her writing and reviews. Great poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Gretchen. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    I almost forgot to say thank you so much for the gracious gift of six stars.
    You are such a sweetheart!