Helping Hand
Senryu21 total reviews
Comment from Frances Jean
A well written Senryu obeying the requirements of the form and accompanied by an appropriate photo. I feel your spirituality through your few words of faith. Take care Franky
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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A well written Senryu obeying the requirements of the form and accompanied by an appropriate photo. I feel your spirituality through your few words of faith. Take care Franky
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you Franky for stopping by. Santha.
Comment from country ranch writer
God is teaching you to go slow and mot rush, that is when you make the most mistakes.he reaches out fir you to take so he can guide you along the way.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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God is teaching you to go slow and mot rush, that is when you make the most mistakes.he reaches out fir you to take so he can guide you along the way.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
Such a poignant thought in so few words. Words done. Have a blessed Thanksgiving wherever you are. ...................................................................................
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Such a poignant thought in so few words. Words done. Have a blessed Thanksgiving wherever you are. ...................................................................................
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you once again for this generosity .I am sorry my reply was delayed
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I pondered on the message in this poem - I found it
comforting and reassuring. The artwork is perfect and compliments
both the theme and words of this poem.
Happy Thanksgiving!....Maria
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I pondered on the message in this poem - I found it
comforting and reassuring. The artwork is perfect and compliments
both the theme and words of this poem.
Happy Thanksgiving!....Maria
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much.Hope you had a lovely Thanksgiving.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Hi Sanku!
You created a perfect pairing for your Senryu club entry - verse and illustration are really in sync.
Inventive 'stepping stones' phrase rather than ladder or stairs!
'stream of my troubles' is another excellent phrase!
Mark
P.S. Consider adding a space before your squiggle.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Hi Sanku!
You created a perfect pairing for your Senryu club entry - verse and illustration are really in sync.
Inventive 'stepping stones' phrase rather than ladder or stairs!
'stream of my troubles' is another excellent phrase!
Mark
P.S. Consider adding a space before your squiggle.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much once again for these lovely stars.I am sorry my reply is delayed. Thanks for the suggestion .I have left a space there
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Helping Hand, has the proper formatting and allows that people are the hands and feet of God and that their assistance is what connects us together with the Maker.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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This senryu, Helping Hand, has the proper formatting and allows that people are the hands and feet of God and that their assistance is what connects us together with the Maker.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Faith can indeed help us on our journey and we are grateful for those guiding hands, I enjoyed your fine warm nurturing words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Faith can indeed help us on our journey and we are grateful for those guiding hands, I enjoyed your fine warm nurturing words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from susand3022
A very nice visual, Sanku, with the steppingstones. I liked it very much. I also liked the 'stream of troubles'. It's a very descriptive line that works very well in its context.
Nicely done
Susan :)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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A very nice visual, Sanku, with the steppingstones. I liked it very much. I also liked the 'stream of troubles'. It's a very descriptive line that works very well in its context.
Nicely done
Susan :)
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Terry Broxson
This a wonderful haiku for this club event. The poem works on many levels, and I do think the message is well said. I am amazed that so few words can capture such meaning. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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This a wonderful haiku for this club event. The poem works on many levels, and I do think the message is well said. I am amazed that so few words can capture such meaning. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for stopping by
Comment from karenina
Very well said... Evocation be words that ate as deep as they are succinct! You have a gift for the concise yet effectively Haiku form...
Can I copy this to put on my desk?
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Very well said... Evocation be words that ate as deep as they are succinct! You have a gift for the concise yet effectively Haiku form...
Can I copy this to put on my desk?
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Of course .I would be honoured. Thank you very much.
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Great! I appreciate it!
