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President Biden Named His Turkey Perky3 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Too funny. We are competitors, but I'm still gonna throw you some fixes, cause we are on Team FS.
Yes,turkey jerky is what Biden said!Quirky
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You cold hear him say,"I can't stay"
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Get er done !
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
Too funny. We are competitors, but I'm still gonna throw you some fixes, cause we are on Team FS.
Yes,turkey jerky is what Biden said!Quirky
(you need a space after the comma and before Quirky)
You cold hear him say,"I can't stay"
(space after the comma)
Get er done !
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from dragonpoet
I like this silly poem about a thanksgiving turkey. I don't think the turkey will be perky for long. I like that one escaped before the other one got sent to become Turkey jerky. Good internal rhyme. Good use of irony in that the turkey got sent to Turkey to become
jerky.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
I like this silly poem about a thanksgiving turkey. I don't think the turkey will be perky for long. I like that one escaped before the other one got sent to become Turkey jerky. Good internal rhyme. Good use of irony in that the turkey got sent to Turkey to become
jerky.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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So glad you enjoyed this
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That I did.
Joan
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smiles
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Perhaps I missed you mentioning the third turkey, supposedly in charge, named Brandon. What a revoltin' predicament its placed us in. LOL America. .......................................
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
Perhaps I missed you mentioning the third turkey, supposedly in charge, named Brandon. What a revoltin' predicament its placed us in. LOL America. .......................................
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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There were only two turkeys