Rogadoo Discovered
a new species launches a war against humanity4 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Wow! What a tale you weaved. The plot started off well but was a bit rushed near the end. It would be good to know how the weapons over the entire world quit working. The beginning is better than your closing. I cannot imagine as much as mankind love weapons; they would give up so easily. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Wow! What a tale you weaved. The plot started off well but was a bit rushed near the end. It would be good to know how the weapons over the entire world quit working. The beginning is better than your closing. I cannot imagine as much as mankind love weapons; they would give up so easily. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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thanks for the critique. The ending needs a bit more work.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lancellot
A challenge for creative-minded Master Poets. You have discovered the world's first and only Rogadoo! Tell us about it in a poem. Any form, style, or length.
Now, given this above, I have to say. I have no idea what a rogadoo is. So, since you can write one in any form, style, or length. Nothing you write can be wrong.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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A challenge for creative-minded Master Poets. You have discovered the world's first and only Rogadoo! Tell us about it in a poem. Any form, style, or length.
Now, given this above, I have to say. I have no idea what a rogadoo is. So, since you can write one in any form, style, or length. Nothing you write can be wrong.
Good luck.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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yeah that was the fun oart of it,
Comment from Dr. Von
I like the creative description of the Rogadoo. The writing is solid with a believable storyline. Describing the event flow strengthened the poem. Well done. Good luck in the contest. You might review your poem for tense continuity and one place where there is an extra word.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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I like the creative description of the Rogadoo. The writing is solid with a believable storyline. Describing the event flow strengthened the poem. Well done. Good luck in the contest. You might review your poem for tense continuity and one place where there is an extra word.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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cool I will double check it good catch
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You are welcome.
Comment from BOO ghost
Writing Prompt
A challenge for the creative minded Master Poets. You have discovered the worlds first and only Rogadoo! Tell us about it in a poem. Any form, style, or length.
I read this first.
Well, there is a mythical creature called a rougarou on Monster Quest. Did someone get this idea from to the rougarou? Seems similar.
Kinda looks like this is written in script category. This is a free verse poem?
Good luck in the contest prompt.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Writing Prompt
A challenge for the creative minded Master Poets. You have discovered the worlds first and only Rogadoo! Tell us about it in a poem. Any form, style, or length.
I read this first.
Well, there is a mythical creature called a rougarou on Monster Quest. Did someone get this idea from to the rougarou? Seems similar.
Kinda looks like this is written in script category. This is a free verse poem?
Good luck in the contest prompt.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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yeah a sort of free verse prose poem with a dash of magical realism.
