Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

What we cannot see at this time, but must see later, will have an impact which we cannot imagine right now. In fact, it may happen very soon, sooner that we expect.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022

Thank you, Mark

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Hmm, I never thought of the new moon being a starless night. I wonder why. Hmm, but I guess it's true. We know they're there, so why not the love. I think I need to figure this out. LOL Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022

Hello, Barbara, the new moon is invisible and the stars could be hard to see through clouds or smog. Thank you for the fine review.

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Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

I love the final line, the love you don't see. Hello Gypsy! I am looking through my list of those I am following and found this Senryu among those. I hope you are well and having a good time this season of autumn.
Have a happy week!
Jesse

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022

Thank you, Jesse, it's good to hear from you and you sound in very good spirits. I'm well. I appreciate your excellent and kind review. Have a nice day.

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reply by Jesse James Doty on 07-Nov-2022

Glad to hear it!
Thanks for the gypsy hugs!
Jesse

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Interesting. It's a "starless" night so we don't see the "new moon" or the stars. But we still know they are there and the lights are hidden by perhaps a cloudy night. Sometimes, we don't always see the "love" expressed verbally or in actions, but we know it's there.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

That's true. It's hard for some people to show love even if they feel it. Thank you very much, big sister! Love you.

Marival ❤️

reply by lyenochka on 06-Nov-2022

I know people like that! My parents were definitely like that with each other. Sigh.
Hugs !! 😻💖🌻

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Senryu poem- looking for the moon in the presentation - after reading the notes realized it was a starless night- hello! Learn something new every day- thank you- you're so smart! Good job

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

You do come up with some of the most beautiful poetry. You almost make me want to try it. I grew up in the fifties and all these different poetry forms were unknown, at least to me. I love your writing.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Thank you very much, Prettybluebirds, you are very kind. I wish you a lovely enjoyable day. If you ever want to try it out, I have two clubs. You are welcome to join us.

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Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, I like this. Well done. Thought provoking:

the love you don't see
(strong than the love by your side)

Great photo choice. Good sensory appeal. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022

Thank you very much, Margaret. You are very kind.

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