Lost Lad
a tale of woe3 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Not a pleasant way to go is all I can say. Nothing left but blood guts and bones drinking up the universe.
10/30/2022-----7:22 pm
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Not a pleasant way to go is all I can say. Nothing left but blood guts and bones drinking up the universe.
10/30/2022-----7:22 pm
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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What a wonderful universe we live in. Thanks for the starry sixpack.
Jer
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a tremendous poem for the most frightening of Hallowe'en's. I enjoyed it immensely, and can imagine scaring my grandchildren with it in a few years (we put my children off clowns forever with the film based on the Stephen King book IT). Kate xx
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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This is a tremendous poem for the most frightening of Hallowe'en's. I enjoyed it immensely, and can imagine scaring my grandchildren with it in a few years (we put my children off clowns forever with the film based on the Stephen King book IT). Kate xx
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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hello my friend,
children are never too young to be scared.
thank you for the high five.
Jer
Comment from Brandon Clark
This is very good! Well-crafted and great use of words which makes it easier for readers to see something probably similar to what you envisioned when writing it. Great Job! And good luck in the contest!
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This is very good! Well-crafted and great use of words which makes it easier for readers to see something probably similar to what you envisioned when writing it. Great Job! And good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
