Comment from T B Botts

Exceptional

Hello Author,
What a wonderful story to read, although incredibly sad on the one hand. I see it's fiction, and yet it reads like real life. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022

Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words. Gretchen

Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

Gosh, quite a nice writing. I find it a bit difficult to review as it is more of a feeling I want to express. Love, patience, kindness, faith are words that simply fall short. Mom carries the strongest meaning.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022

Thank you.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a powerful story about this girl who is in a world of her own. We may get the idea that she is lost, but I see the reference goes to the narrator, who has walked through the doubts and fears to find life's meaning.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022

Thank you so much!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A beautiful story of a child lost in her own world, and you, emotionally lost at first. You wrote it well and with feeling. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022

Thank you!