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Why do I love you
2 total reviews
Comment from
Cass Carlton
There are two Spags herein. "Load" star ought to be spelt "lode" star. And shining has one "n" in the middle not two. Just a note to make this a perfect poem. This is a beautifully written poem in tribute to a true, true love. What a lucky girl!!! What a lucky fella!!! It sums up his feelings for her in loving words of praise and thanks.Well said, my dear chap, well done. cheers Cass
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
thanks for catching the typos. I'll will them now
Comment from
Carol Hillebrenner
She is a lucky girl that you find so many things to love about her. This is a well written poem, but you might make a few changes: "shining" and "lode star"
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
yeah others have caught those typos. Thanks a lot
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