One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mark Schardine
The memories remain, and perhaps the two persons should have never been separated. Each year it seems like a ritual to recall someone we once loved and embraced.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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The memories remain, and perhaps the two persons should have never been separated. Each year it seems like a ritual to recall someone we once loved and embraced.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Hope rises like a phoenix from the ashes of shattered dreams." --S.A. Sachs
Comment from Marienkiefer
Wow, Gypsy. This is wonderful. Your words flow across the page in beautiful lines, picture perfect.
A joy to read and appreciate the views you gift us in your poetry and images.
A crisp, clear autumn poem. All the best.
Hugs and good cheer.
M.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Wow, Gypsy. This is wonderful. Your words flow across the page in beautiful lines, picture perfect.
A joy to read and appreciate the views you gift us in your poetry and images.
A crisp, clear autumn poem. All the best.
Hugs and good cheer.
M.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem- good picture presentation- poem has good flow- poem tells a good story - clever- same setting- same time of year- same me- missing you - excellent
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I like your haiku poem- good picture presentation- poem has good flow- poem tells a good story - clever- same setting- same time of year- same me- missing you - excellent
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Hugs!
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
I imagine two lovers who have an ongoing meeting place, "same creek" and the heartache they suffer waiting for their time to meet, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I imagine two lovers who have an ongoing meeting place, "same creek" and the heartache they suffer waiting for their time to meet, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This haiku gives a feeling of visiting a place to bring back memories of a lost love one. You made a good choice on the artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Hi MariVal,
This haiku gives a feeling of visiting a place to bring back memories of a lost love one. You made a good choice on the artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and and kind review. Hugs.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very touching. The melancholy path to the place where memories flow. The presentation was impeccable. The flow and tone were perfect. Great job on this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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This was very touching. The melancholy path to the place where memories flow. The presentation was impeccable. The flow and tone were perfect. Great job on this. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem shares an element of peace and grief at the same time. That's hard to do. I enjoyed reading. Again, you presented us with an entire package. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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This poem shares an element of peace and grief at the same time. That's hard to do. I enjoyed reading. Again, you presented us with an entire package. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Barbara, I appreciate your kind review and review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully worded poem about a lost love as one enters the fall. The creek for me shows how despite some things remaining the same other things are altered and changed. The fall in this poem could easily be interpreted also as the fall or late stages of one's life. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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This is a beautifully worded poem about a lost love as one enters the fall. The creek for me shows how despite some things remaining the same other things are altered and changed. The fall in this poem could easily be interpreted also as the fall or late stages of one's life. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Ms Sandy
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a good haiku with effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-The first line shows that you have been to this "same creek" before,
and you come here to think about things, in this case, it is at dusk on an autumn day.
-A good satori line showing how that makes you feel and also remember.
-I appreciated the notes and tried to get to the heart of what you were saying.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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-Very nice image and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a good haiku with effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-The first line shows that you have been to this "same creek" before,
and you come here to think about things, in this case, it is at dusk on an autumn day.
-A good satori line showing how that makes you feel and also remember.
-I appreciated the notes and tried to get to the heart of what you were saying.
-Well done.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
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You are welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
Your well chosen words bring to mind the nostalgic feeling being in the same place at a specific season and time of day. It's in the close of day, and closing of the year, that can make us yearn more for someone in the past. Another beautiful haiku!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Your well chosen words bring to mind the nostalgic feeling being in the same place at a specific season and time of day. It's in the close of day, and closing of the year, that can make us yearn more for someone in the past. Another beautiful haiku!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Helen, thank you for taking the time to review my poem. It's always good to hear from you. Love you.
Marival ❤️
