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Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your haiku poem-excellent picture presentation - good information in your notes- always enjoy learning something new- good flow and clever satori- good job

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Hugs!

    Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
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What a beautiful read and visual presentation, I like the "envy" image between the Ibis and the Flamingo, these birds are just Majestic, very well presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I like your use of Japanese painting for your Haikus. It's nice to compare Pink Flamingos with Ibis. I saw many Ibis in Fort Meyers, Florida. Most of them are white with red beaks.

Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind words. I appreciate your excellent review. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! That's funny. I like your "ibis envy" as opposed to the Freudian "penis envy." But did you really mean "flamencos?" They look like flamenco dancers but aren't they flamingos?

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Oops..yes, it's supposed to be flamingos, I was thinking in Spanish. LoL I'm glad you liked my humorous poem. Thank you for reviewing and your helpful feedback. I corrected that error. Hugs!

    Love you, sister.

    Marival ❤️
Comment from Dr. Von
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Yes! This is beautifully stated. Your work speaks of presenting a simple observation using descriptive words and powerful artwork. Thank you for demonstrating the creative balance in this piece. I enjoyed reading your work.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
reply by Dr. Von on 28-Sep-2022
    You are welcome.