Mr. Doodle MacGroodle
A man and his dog!4 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
I like your Doodle MacGroodle and his marching poodle. Very catchy title.
-Nicely rhymed, almost a sing-song tune that would be great for kids to read along...They may even dance along, to the rhythm tap: right-left, left-right.
-Vocabulary is well chosen, though gaffed maybe a little bit uncommon. But, for some reason, I actually thought I had read giraffe, at first... how about that?
-Well presented. Nice Colour background.
Lovely read. Great poem. All the best.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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I like your Doodle MacGroodle and his marching poodle. Very catchy title.
-Nicely rhymed, almost a sing-song tune that would be great for kids to read along...They may even dance along, to the rhythm tap: right-left, left-right.
-Vocabulary is well chosen, though gaffed maybe a little bit uncommon. But, for some reason, I actually thought I had read giraffe, at first... how about that?
-Well presented. Nice Colour background.
Lovely read. Great poem. All the best.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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I think I mis understood the competition. I though we were writing poems that kids would actually read. The others wrote adult level poems. My bad.
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But I really love your interpretation. Your poem would make it in a book of poems for kids and kids at heart. Yours was very interactive, it seemed to be you at your best, Just keep doing, you. Enjoy your day.
Marienkiefer 🌸
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Awww thank you. You are so kind.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What are you? A child in disguise, hiding out on Fanstory. This is very good and that's because you are either a child yourself, or a elementary teacher, or an adult with a child's mind. Don't take offense. I like it!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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What are you? A child in disguise, hiding out on Fanstory. This is very good and that's because you are either a child yourself, or a elementary teacher, or an adult with a child's mind. Don't take offense. I like it!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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I have six kids so I am immersed in that world. They love this poem. So do I. ;)
Comment from Alexander Pearce
Read this to my five year old nephew and he laughed the whole way through!
His exact word were:
That's so funny. I want a poodle now to go walking with it. Dogs are fun.
If that isn't a good enough review I don't know what is!?
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Read this to my five year old nephew and he laughed the whole way through!
His exact word were:
That's so funny. I want a poodle now to go walking with it. Dogs are fun.
If that isn't a good enough review I don't know what is!?
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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There is no better appreciate than that! Thank you very much!
Comment from papa55mike
I can see that poem in a ten-page children's book with great illustrations. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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I can see that poem in a ten-page children's book with great illustrations. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the kind words Mike! Young kids really love it!
