Love
short poem.7 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Now how can I sleep with such an image. Well done in choice of picture and thoughtful words. I know she, the missus, appreciates your feeling that way. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Now how can I sleep with such an image. Well done in choice of picture and thoughtful words. I know she, the missus, appreciates your feeling that way. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you God bless
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Oh, it's definitely nudie. I mean I can see things I would not be able to see if the statue had clothes on. But that does not take away from the verse. You love your wife because she is beautiful, and you are willing to hold her up to an obviously very nicely done nude statue of a beautiful woman. I can deal with that.
Very nicely worded.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Oh, it's definitely nudie. I mean I can see things I would not be able to see if the statue had clothes on. But that does not take away from the verse. You love your wife because she is beautiful, and you are willing to hold her up to an obviously very nicely done nude statue of a beautiful woman. I can deal with that.
Very nicely worded.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thank you, you said it all. GBU
Comment from Douglas Goff
Beautifully said. Should 'as' be 'is'?
So, I think it is strange that you married a stone statue, but to each his own. Just kidding.
It's always nice to see a man in love with his woman.
This in nice. Keep up the good work cause writers write, so keep on writing!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Beautifully said. Should 'as' be 'is'?
So, I think it is strange that you married a stone statue, but to each his own. Just kidding.
It's always nice to see a man in love with his woman.
This in nice. Keep up the good work cause writers write, so keep on writing!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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LOL She is anything but a stone Statue, she is all woman! LOL thank you. GBU
Comment from papa55mike
Believe me, that's mild to some of the pictures I've seen on Fanstory. What a wonderfully written poem and I'm sure your wife loved it.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Believe me, that's mild to some of the pictures I've seen on Fanstory. What a wonderfully written poem and I'm sure your wife loved it.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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I had this Picture for a year now. just could not fine the right place for it till this poem. It just fit her( my wife). Thank you GBU
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated short poem. The message of your love is clear. The visual fits well. Because you are using a cursive font, I would make the text a bit larger to assure it can be seen clearly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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This is a beautifully stated short poem. The message of your love is clear. The visual fits well. Because you are using a cursive font, I would make the text a bit larger to assure it can be seen clearly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. GBU
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
The poem was a great reflection of the picture, which was beautiful. It seems that you are lucky to have your wife, and she is lucky to have you. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
For the record, I don't think the picture is "nudie."
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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The poem was a great reflection of the picture, which was beautiful. It seems that you are lucky to have your wife, and she is lucky to have you. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
For the record, I don't think the picture is "nudie."
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words GBU
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This statue is a fine sculpture of a woman with a perfect body and if this reminds you of your wife then you have a deep emotional and physical connection, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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This statue is a fine sculpture of a woman with a perfect body and if this reminds you of your wife then you have a deep emotional and physical connection, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words my lady. Sorry about the Queen, sad time for all. GBU
