The Warning
3-6-9 Poem26 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
The storm is coming, and hurricane Fiona has already struck Canada's eastern seaboard.
Love your imagery, and the built-in layers of interpretation. That is poetry at its finest.
May the odds be ever in your favour with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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The storm is coming, and hurricane Fiona has already struck Canada's eastern seaboard.
Love your imagery, and the built-in layers of interpretation. That is poetry at its finest.
May the odds be ever in your favour with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Many thanks, Gloria. Hope that Fiona stays clear of your place!
Steve
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes in your poem. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes in your poem. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Raul!
Steve
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I'm thrilled to read a poem I understand and really like. I'm not much of a poet so I can appreciate this and don't see it only as a heavenly storm. It seems to have some similarity to what may happen in this country. I hope you didn't use this pen name for your books; no one will ever remember it.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I'm thrilled to read a poem I understand and really like. I'm not much of a poet so I can appreciate this and don't see it only as a heavenly storm. It seems to have some similarity to what may happen in this country. I hope you didn't use this pen name for your books; no one will ever remember it.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thanks, Carol. Yes, there is nearly always some sub-text in my poems and you certainly have your finger on one intended meaning. From all this distance away I have been following the goings-on in the US and in particular the flagging fortunes of your former President. In my humble opinion he belongs in jail and he is several steps closer to that fate this week.
When that actually happens. or even when he is merely indicted, there will certainly be a 'storm' of some magnitude. Buckle up.
Steve
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Now that I see the Steve, your penname
makes sense. I voted for him and now so glad he lost.
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I'm more worried about those who would STILL vote for him, even though it is becoming clearer by the day what sort of a man he is.
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He was always mean-spirited and totally unable to understand the emotions of others, but he did know something about business and was trying to close our borders.
Comment from DeboraDyess
I don't think it should disqualify you... I hope not. This is a beautiful contest entry, capturing the vastness of your topic in a great way. No corrections or suggestions are needed.
Blessings and best in the contest,
Deb
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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I don't think it should disqualify you... I hope not. This is a beautiful contest entry, capturing the vastness of your topic in a great way. No corrections or suggestions are needed.
Blessings and best in the contest,
Deb
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Deb, thanks for the very kind words.
Steve
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nicely done, Steve. I think the additions make this a firm contender in the competition. The picture goes a long way in helping to set the mood.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Very nicely done, Steve. I think the additions make this a firm contender in the competition. The picture goes a long way in helping to set the mood.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thanks, Paul.
As always, the words came first and hen I was lucky enough to find a picture to match.
Steve
Comment from jaded831
Breathtaking, your poem captured fear, giving it wonderful tone. Not only does one feel fear from a physical storm, but also one from within. The picture is perfect for both. You did an excellent job.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Breathtaking, your poem captured fear, giving it wonderful tone. Not only does one feel fear from a physical storm, but also one from within. The picture is perfect for both. You did an excellent job.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Many thanks for the great review and the generous gift of stars. Glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from karenina
This is a powerful poem! The world and the weather have been ripe for such storms and your imagery is excellent!
I don't think any editing completed before the contest is closed affects by out chances with the committee.
This is impressive. I hope they sit up and take notice!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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This is a powerful poem! The world and the weather have been ripe for such storms and your imagery is excellent!
I don't think any editing completed before the contest is closed affects by out chances with the committee.
This is impressive. I hope they sit up and take notice!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thanks, Karenina. I'm happy with the positive reviews and the little lesson about reading the instructions more carefully next time!
Steve
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Steve,
wow, outstanding presentation .... so beautiful!
I enjoyed reading your poem about the power of nature, storms, and the power of god, whatever it may be. It's ominous and melancholic.
I like your unique style of writing. You have a way with words that is captivating. Your writing flows well and it's easy to follow. Thank you for sharing it. Good luck in the contest!
Well done. (*-*)
Gypsy
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason.- Novalis
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Hello, Steve,
wow, outstanding presentation .... so beautiful!
I enjoyed reading your poem about the power of nature, storms, and the power of god, whatever it may be. It's ominous and melancholic.
I like your unique style of writing. You have a way with words that is captivating. Your writing flows well and it's easy to follow. Thank you for sharing it. Good luck in the contest!
Well done. (*-*)
Gypsy
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason.- Novalis
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thanks, Gypsy - I value your poetic understanding.
Yes, I try to keep my stuff accessible, even though there are almost always layers of meaning.
Nice quote, too!
Steve
Comment from Lilly Flowers
This is really attention grabbing. The title grabbed me first, the awesome image was frightening and your words were captivating. I think storm could be a metaphor for so much that's going on in the world. Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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This is really attention grabbing. The title grabbed me first, the awesome image was frightening and your words were captivating. I think storm could be a metaphor for so much that's going on in the world. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thanks, Lilly.
Let's hope world events don't end up in the kind of apocalyptic storm described in my words. Despite the poem and recent news out of Russia, i remain optimistic.
Steve
Comment from royowen
If I didn't know you better Steve, I'd swear you'd had an epiphany, and even if one doesn't believe it, all poets touch the divine in their moon influenced reflection of the original light. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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If I didn't know you better Steve, I'd swear you'd had an epiphany, and even if one doesn't believe it, all poets touch the divine in their moon influenced reflection of the original light. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thanks, Roy. Several reviewers seem to see some statement of faith in my words, but I don't see it myself. Just a little musing on how some people feel the world is heading for both literal and figurative storms. I'll stay optimistic for now.
Steve
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Well done
