Grey
The silent rolling of the mist6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A mist reminds us of a whisper and I enjoyed your descriptions here of the mystical mist rolling in like a creeping blanket that blinds our vision, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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A mist reminds us of a whisper and I enjoyed your descriptions here of the mystical mist rolling in like a creeping blanket that blinds our vision, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you Dolly?.your stars and lovely review are much appreciated :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Mystically and at the same time literally expressed the silent rolling of the mist, only a minute observer could appreciate; it affects life but not very much; so, it is well termed grey; I do appreciate the order of the rhymes, and the endeavour; though rhymes are not placed in order; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Mystically and at the same time literally expressed the silent rolling of the mist, only a minute observer could appreciate; it affects life but not very much; so, it is well termed grey; I do appreciate the order of the rhymes, and the endeavour; though rhymes are not placed in order; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your review and of course your rating. Both are very much appreciated :)
Comment from PENofFIRE
Beautifully written. I am a lover of words and the way you wielded yours, painted such a vivid picture of eventide. There is a touch of sophistication as you address the mist like an old friend. Best wishes in winning the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Beautifully written. I am a lover of words and the way you wielded yours, painted such a vivid picture of eventide. There is a touch of sophistication as you address the mist like an old friend. Best wishes in winning the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Many thanks for your review and rating. Both are very much appreciated :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. Your imagery is excellent. The word choices are also excellent. And this flows so well. I didn't notice the rhyme which is a good sign. Very creative.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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I thought this was well written. Your imagery is excellent. The word choices are also excellent. And this flows so well. I didn't notice the rhyme which is a good sign. Very creative.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for your review. I truly appreciate your comments and the stars :)
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem uses personification and metaphor well to describe the mist that dissipates quickly at the change in temperature. It also like the alliteration/consonance with the 'c' sounds.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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This poem uses personification and metaphor well to describe the mist that dissipates quickly at the change in temperature. It also like the alliteration/consonance with the 'c' sounds.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for your review. I like the fact you have looked at more than the subject and given me a grade that is truly appreciated :)
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You are most kindly welcome, Kazzawin.
Joan
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you. I don?t quite understand what you?re saying but appreciate you reading.
