True Love
True love has no bounds.10 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Congrats on second place in this contest...
It's a well written fictional account that I bet plays out more often than we realize.
For these two characters, the only happy ending had to be together.
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Congrats on second place in this contest...
It's a well written fictional account that I bet plays out more often than we realize.
For these two characters, the only happy ending had to be together.
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. I appreciate them.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
WHEW! That story is deep. It is well-told. The image fits perfectly. However, the font size needs to be larger for older eyes. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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WHEW! That story is deep. It is well-told. The image fits perfectly. However, the font size needs to be larger for older eyes. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate your kind words and stars.
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You are welcome. Your ending was tough and heartbreaking.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Till death do you part. Stories like this HAVE to be fiction or FS reviewers couldn't handle it. I had a sister die of lung cancer. She was home in a hospital bed, unconscious from drugs and at the last instant, with her very last breath, she sat straight up in bed, pointed right at me and mouthed the words "I Love You". Not fiction. I will ever forget it.
Yours is a true tale of heartfelt love for one another. Sorrowful but true.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Till death do you part. Stories like this HAVE to be fiction or FS reviewers couldn't handle it. I had a sister die of lung cancer. She was home in a hospital bed, unconscious from drugs and at the last instant, with her very last breath, she sat straight up in bed, pointed right at me and mouthed the words "I Love You". Not fiction. I will ever forget it.
Yours is a true tale of heartfelt love for one another. Sorrowful but true.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from Wendy G
Such a sad story of love, but a well-written one. You built up well to the last sentence. Sending you best wishes for your entry in the Flash contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Such a sad story of love, but a well-written one. You built up well to the last sentence. Sending you best wishes for your entry in the Flash contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, True Love, has the required word count and tells a sad story of cancer and suicide. The first-person narrator leads to the problem of the ghost narrator, that a third-person perspective would eliminate.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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This one-hundred-word story, True Love, has the required word count and tells a sad story of cancer and suicide. The first-person narrator leads to the problem of the ghost narrator, that a third-person perspective would eliminate.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
What a sad Flash Fiction story you have penned here. It is totally unexpected that the husband would decide to die alongside his wife. Touching, but tragic. Kate xx
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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What a sad Flash Fiction story you have penned here. It is totally unexpected that the husband would decide to die alongside his wife. Touching, but tragic. Kate xx
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from jessizero
This was a sweet and romantic story. My only complaint is that you told it in the past tense, which gives the impression that they lived through this events. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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This was a sweet and romantic story. My only complaint is that you told it in the past tense, which gives the impression that they lived through this events. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an exceptional entry in the Flash 100 writing prompt contest. A perfect example of the universal definition of unconditional love.
"No one has greater love than this: that one should lay down his life for his friends.
Cheers,
Eugene
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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This is an exceptional entry in the Flash 100 writing prompt contest. A perfect example of the universal definition of unconditional love.
"No one has greater love than this: that one should lay down his life for his friends.
Cheers,
Eugene
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a sad, but well written contest entry, Mystery Author.
Your story tugs at readers' hearts from the start. The picture
was supporting. Your twist at the end was unexpected, but
fitting.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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What a sad, but well written contest entry, Mystery Author.
Your story tugs at readers' hearts from the start. The picture
was supporting. Your twist at the end was unexpected, but
fitting.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from kahpot
Your short intro "Love has no bounds" is very powerful and true, your short story here is full of emotion and love, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Your short intro "Love has no bounds" is very powerful and true, your short story here is full of emotion and love, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. I appreciate them.
