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flash fiction, 50 word story6 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Good old phone solicitation. Psychic reading is one of the most outlandish. IF the art is possible, how can it ever be practiced over the phone, through the wires, hundreds of miles away. You easily met the requirement of "dribble."
Good one.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Good old phone solicitation. Psychic reading is one of the most outlandish. IF the art is possible, how can it ever be practiced over the phone, through the wires, hundreds of miles away. You easily met the requirement of "dribble."
Good one.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you :)
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Oh, I see where you came from. This must have been a blind entry or a voting booth? I read it and rated. So, you thought you would come see what that fat old fart has on FS. I am tickled to see you checking out my portfolio. Hope to see more of you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt contest.
I love gypsies, as you might guess (*<>*)
Good words count and story line. A great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Excellent entry for the 50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt contest.
I love gypsies, as you might guess (*<>*)
Good words count and story line. A great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifty-word flash fiction story, Advertising, has the required word count and gives an example of how one can lose money even while home alone.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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This fifty-word flash fiction story, Advertising, has the required word count and gives an example of how one can lose money even while home alone.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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You're so right. Thank you
Hope you're having a nice week :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Do psychics just give us a reading we would like to hear? Most people live ordinary, uneventful lives, but a psychic can make our life feel special, different and wonderful, I have never been to one though, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Do psychics just give us a reading we would like to hear? Most people live ordinary, uneventful lives, but a psychic can make our life feel special, different and wonderful, I have never been to one though, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Hellow Dolly. You're nice. Don't do it. I called it was $13 a minute on Sunday. Prices have escalated. So, I didn't get a phone reading. Thank you. Love always your friend :)
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A neat short story. You even worked in a twist at the end. The story has a start, a slight tension, and a resolution that resolves nothing.
A neat read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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A neat short story. You even worked in a twist at the end. The story has a start, a slight tension, and a resolution that resolves nothing.
A neat read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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You're nice. Thank you :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I liked your choices of words. The gnawing at attention and the annoying voice prompts. I cringe at those things. You showed it perfectly. I'm not sure if I understood the last part but it seemed to me that the person on the other end was telling her she could pick her reading. Any way, this was a cute piece of flash fiction.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I liked your choices of words. The gnawing at attention and the annoying voice prompts. I cringe at those things. You showed it perfectly. I'm not sure if I understood the last part but it seemed to me that the person on the other end was telling her she could pick her reading. Any way, this was a cute piece of flash fiction.
Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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You're not into psychics. That's good. I grew out of tarot readings. You're nice. Thank you :)
